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You call up and say: “Hello, how are you today?” I’m dead and rottin’ away, But my droid is pretty bright, It answers “I’m all right!” You celebrate the bi-centennial, And call up your oldest serving menial: My spirit is hardly congenial, But my droid is going strong; It accepts congratulations from the throng. So when all is said and done, I’ve been dust on the floor of sub-station one Twenty-three revolutions of the sun. Your polite query is replied, By the droid who inherited my pride. Originally published: Clarke, R. (Ed) The Mentor 87, July 1995, fanzine published by Ron Clarke, Sydney, Australia, [Archival copy available online at http://efanzines.com/Mentor/TM87COMP.pdf].

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Date: 8/26/2017 5:02:00 PM
Awesome imagery. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 6/1/2017 12:52:00 AM
I find this very funny, Cecelia. I'll be back to read more:)
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Date: 5/4/2017 8:43:00 PM
Futuristic!
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Date: 4/26/2017 5:39:00 PM
Well done, Cecelia: I hope to see more. My compliments!
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Date: 4/26/2017 3:07:00 PM
enjoyed this thanks for sharing
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Date: 4/19/2017 3:59:00 PM
Nicely done, a 7 for me, please :)
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Date: 4/18/2017 5:33:00 PM
clever., hinting at melancholy.,
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Date: 4/18/2017 7:47:00 AM
Cecelia, i find your poem sub-station one to be truly professional and ingenious. It is also to say the least, highly impressive.
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Date: 4/1/2017 6:59:00 PM
I just discovered your poetry tonight - I'll be reading more of it. Welcome to PS.
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Date: 3/31/2017 12:20:00 AM
Isn't it woderful that we have droids? Even is they're only metaphorical? Sometimes I hope people will look right through my mechanical outside, but often I am glad they can't... Great first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome :)
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Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
Date: 3/31/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thank you David. I took a look at your poetry too - you have a great message to share.

Book: Shattered Sighs