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Stupefied

Challenging luck with hard work, hanging on faith gets you nowhere; Hoping to float but you need to swim, drifting along won’t get you there; Tied up choked by a winsome wish, stupefied unable to survive; Tried to coast down a lazy river, nullified talent with no drive.

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Date: 1/4/2023 12:36:00 PM
Yes. Even at four score and ten, I have to keep reminding myself that just having a good idea is not sufficient! I especially like the hoping to float but... Elizabeth
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/4/2023 12:46:00 PM
Thank you. Also you are 100 percent correct.

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