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Stunned

Last night in shul I saw a young lady completely out of my age range She could be my daughter maybe even my granddaughter But nevertheless I couldn't keep my eyes off her Enslaved by her beauty and youth I march to the tune which the celestial powers have laid out for me Peace is hard to find!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/6/2012 6:29:00 AM
That old saying 'look but don't touch come in play here '.lol lol. There are people we see and are drawn to, some inner magnetism is at work here. Eveyone loves an honest man Matthew.Love this poem.Well written .Anne
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:51:00 PM
love it, matt. This comes over me once in a great while upon seeing a gorgeous hunk of man standing in front of me like in a line in the store or something! Enjoyed your fun comments on Gypsy Rose.
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:16:00 PM
Look but don't touch is the rule my husband and I share. Great little poem.
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Date: 4/25/2012 8:21:00 AM
Smile ˜ Did you know that Solomon had seven hundred wives? Three hundred concubines? I guess he couldn't help himself he was just, a lover ˜ Hahaha, love, John!:) ˜
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