Stumped By the Grim Reaper

Perplexed cross-eyed peeper, encountered grim reaper.
Unsnapped devil’s raincoat, castrated cork afloat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 11:30 AM
Scary and humorous at the same time, great entry Kim!
Anaya Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 7:26 PM
btw. Happy Friday the thirteenth!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Thanks, Anaya!
George Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 9:47 PM
Great one dear Kim. Grim reaper waits outside making us scary ! Do not know when he will cut us down with his scathe. Quite intriguing !
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Even your comment is poetic! A cousin’s son once visited his great-grandma in his Halloween costume. Dressed as the grim reaper he strolled into the Senior Home. My husband got a kick out of that!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Alas! The ill effect of impaired impaired. A smile returned! Aloha, William
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 1:57 PM
LOL!
May Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Cool form Kim, Nicely done
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Kim, This celestial confrontation was nothing short of breathtaking. You masterfully captured the essence of the devil's seductive charm,
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Empress Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 3:25 AM
Brilliant alexandrine. Loved reading this. Im thinking of trying this too
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Thank you! Hope Suzette likes it :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 1:49 AM
That's the way to deal with the devil. Hugs and blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Yup! Thank you, Victor! Hugs and blessings!
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 8:56 PM
Interesting, I like the unsnapping of the devil's coat...and other ideas here. Cool one!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Thank you, Paige!
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