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Stumped By the Grim Reaper

Perplexed cross-eyed peeper, encountered grim reaper. Unsnapped devil’s raincoat, castrated cork afloat.

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I Am Anaya

Date: 10/13/2023 11:30:00 AM

Scary and humorous at the same time, great entry Kim!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/13/2023 7:26:00 PM

btw. Happy Friday the thirteenth!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2023 1:56:00 PM

Thanks, Anaya!

Valsa George

Date: 10/12/2023 9:47:00 PM

Great one dear Kim. Grim reaper waits outside making us scary ! Do not know when he will cut us down with his scathe. Quite intriguing !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2023 1:57:00 PM

Even your comment is poetic! A cousin’s son once visited his great-grandma in his Halloween costume. Dressed as the grim reaper he strolled into the Senior Home. My husband got a kick out of that!

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/12/2023 7:55:00 PM

Alas! The ill effect of impaired impaired. A smile returned! Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2023 1:57:00 PM

LOL!

Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2023 10:09:00 AM

Cool form Kim, Nicely done

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/12/2023 5:49:00 AM

Kim, This celestial confrontation was nothing short of breathtaking. You masterfully captured the essence of the devil's seductive charm,

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/12/2023 3:25:00 AM

Brilliant alexandrine. Loved reading this. Im thinking of trying this too

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thank you! Hope Suzette likes it :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/12/2023 1:49:00 AM

That's the way to deal with the devil. Hugs and blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 12:17:00 PM

Yup! Thank you, Victor! Hugs and blessings!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/11/2023 8:56:00 PM

Interesting, I like the unsnapping of the devil's coat...and other ideas here. Cool one!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 12:17:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!