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Stuck In Traffic

I was going to change to the fast lane, when abruptly the traffic flow ended, red brake lights giving amber alerts say, better slow down or you'll get hurt, Follow the leader like a pied piper snail, then stop and go like your delivering mail, sit and wait patiently for some small movement, interstate constipated needs motor routing, Mysterious destination exit a little bit up ahead, some daring cars take the detour and anxiously fled, I want to be adventurous and follow and meander, cautiously I sit stuck in traffic and in my frustration wallow, I hear the helmsman up above say "steady as she goes" and that in time all things good come to those who wait, and with that the snarled traffic starts to once again flow, patience, prayer and a steady course is what I'll try to take. 3-15-17 140 words

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Date: 3/18/2017 9:49:00 AM
You've got the "My mind always thinks in rhymes" now don't you! Wonderful!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/18/2017 10:31:00 AM
Probably so because it was hard to write a free verse where your not supposed to rhyme but I couldn't help but rhyme! Thanks so much for kind comment and visit Mike!~Che :)
Date: 3/16/2017 3:51:00 PM
.... Sigh ... a normal day ... tiring - A well written poem, Cheryl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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