Stuck In Bed

I know my supervisor thought I lied, the day I said.
The reason that I had been out was I was stuck in bed.
I tried explaining desperately the rain had been to blame.
He looked at me like I was nuts, it really was a shame.

I told him that the night before it had rained cats and dogs.
So much that by the morning time the flooding hit the bogs.
And seeing how my little house is near a swampy creek.
It wasn’t long before my house had sprung a great big leak.

His face got twisted when I said my house got washed away.
And pretty soon my house was floating on Big Hollow Bay.
I told him in great detail how the planks began to break.
And how I wound up floating in my bed in Big Bear Lake.

I finally was rescued by the firemen in town.
It took them many hours just to pull my bed in ground.
So like I said, I told him that the rain had been to blame.
Unfortunately, I don’t think that he believes my claim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/24/2012 6:37:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win. [anytime you make some one laugh you suceeded!]
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/24/2012 6:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Debbie! I'm glad it gave you a chuckle! :)
Date: 4/20/2012 7:58:00 PM
haha, a nice funny one. BIG congrats on your deserved win.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/20/2012 8:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: 4/20/2012 10:14:00 AM
I totally believed you - it could happen to anyone. Congratulations on the win. Mike
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/20/2012 11:00:00 AM
Hi Mike, Thank you very much! Yes, it could happen to anyone! :)
Date: 4/19/2012 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Samia. Love, Carol
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/19/2012 6:51:00 AM
Hi Carol, Thank you very much for your comment! :)
Date: 4/18/2012 6:12:00 PM
LOL..quite a whopper! Congrad's Light & Love
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/18/2012 6:15:00 PM
Hi Debbie, Thank you very much! I was hoping it would give readers a chuckle! :)
Date: 4/18/2012 10:11:00 AM
Samia congrats on your win, love it...David
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/18/2012 10:12:00 AM
Hi David, Thank you very much. I'm very glad that you liked it! :)
Date: 4/18/2012 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on a great win
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/18/2012 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph! :)
Date: 4/18/2012 9:38:00 AM
You play the blaming very creatively. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/18/2012 10:09:00 AM
LOL - Thank you Joyce! :)
Date: 4/18/2012 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your #4 win in my contest!
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/18/2012 10:06:00 AM
Hi Black Eyed Susan, Thank you so much! :)
Date: 4/16/2012 1:10:00 PM
Thanks for the smile Samia. This was quite an enjoyable read. Well done. If you would like the smile returned, please read "Urgent Need". Thanks again for sharing. You never fail to please. Rockman :-)
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/16/2012 2:01:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it Rockman! Thank you very much. I look forward to reading 'Urgent Need.' :)
Date: 4/15/2012 8:03:00 PM
It's funny and flowing and stuck in bed was a bit of an understanding!!(laugh!!)...Nice write Samia!..Keep it up!!>>>Love Diana
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Date: 4/16/2012 4:41:00 AM
Hi Diana, Thank you very much! I am so glad that you enjoyed it. I really appreciate your comment. :)
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