Stuck In a Christmas Globe

In the store, I pick up a globe with a beautiful scene.
On a park bench, a couple is cuddling.
Red ribbons and bows adorn the street lamp next to them.
Christmas lights hung cheerily are encircling a pine.
What might this couple be discussing?
What joy might they feel?
I long for the bliss they seem to share inside that globe.

I shake it, and snow sprinkles down so prettily.
Closing my eyes, I hold the globe and shake it again,
seeing the scene again in my mind’s eye.
Then I open my eyes; I’m inside the globe!

Music of Christmas from somewhere is playing:
“But as long as you love me so, let it snow, let it snow, let it snow.”
There’s a stranger at my side; he is dark and handsome.
His fingers are twining in and out with mine.
No words are needed; this is the language of love I adore.
I am youthful again, feeling fresh as the crisp winter air,
stirring with dreams and reveling in romance.
This feeling – how long can it last?
I’m stuck inside the Christmas globe.
Should I want to get out?

Suddenly snow is drifting down on me and the wonderful man.
Some entity outside our sphere has found the Christmas globe.
It feels like my whole world is shaking,
but it matches the quivering deep in my soul,
and I know that 
                        I do not want out.

Dec. 1, 2019 for Bobby May's Stuck in a Christmas Globe Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/17/2019 12:33:00 PM
- Sorry late response ... Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea :) - Christmas is approaching ... and I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2019 3:08:00 PM
A different take on being in a snowglobe; well penned and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/13/2019 4:56:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Bobby's Christmas Globe contest, Andrea - keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:19:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 12/12/2019 9:48:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 12/12/2019 7:05:00 PM
Congrats On your winning poem Andrea
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Date: 12/12/2019 7:00:00 PM
ha, ha! Smart decision! Love the ingenuity in this one, Andrea, and congrats on your win in the contest. Season's Joy! :) gw
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Date: 12/12/2019 5:57:00 PM
As always - very creative telling of a story with wonderful word pictures. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/5/2019 5:28:00 AM
Beautiful storyline excellent write
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Date: 12/2/2019 2:43:00 PM
Wow - where you took this was intense and a bit thrilling, really like your approach to the contest. All I can think of for this contest is that I wrote for the same topic last year and I'm still stuck in that snow globe. This is a real treat to read. I wonder if you had to do free verse or choose to - I'll go back and read about the contest. Good luck with this, Sweetie, and all else. Miss you. Love, CayCay (Soup Mail)
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Date: 12/2/2019 3:26:00 PM
yes, dear, it was free verse, a form I wish I truly knew how to write well in!
Date: 12/2/2019 6:53:00 AM
Exquisite imagery of the festive season--so much happiness and revelry in your words--magical write, Andrea.
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Date: 12/2/2019 12:37:00 AM
What a lovely fantasy, Andrea. I love snow globes...always have. I see that it's for a contest...so good luck! :D P.S. Check your soupmail.
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Date: 12/1/2019 9:58:00 PM
Best of luck in the contest Andrea. This one is good. I love how each person puts there own take on each poem. Have agreat day
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Date: 12/1/2019 8:16:00 PM
I so love it! I can feel the magic within the snow globe. GL in contest, my sweet friend!
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