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Stuck Halfway

Most dissolve or become shrines you visit in old age. Others linger, unresolved, and can sit there in memory for years until what is missing comes creeping back or starts the replay of a moment you paused long ago, now let to run its full length even if a lifetime late. There are others that remain always in between, stuck halfway like a stone cast into the dark, when the ear waits to hear it break the river's quiet, but there is no sound, no end, only a silence and the fog coming in, the cold, bitter air biting on every nerve, panic taking hold, closing in to keep a part of you there, waiting for something that will never come.

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Date: 4/2/2023 3:18:00 PM
My commenting verve is waning now, so just to say I've liked several more of your poems on my travels through the list. I will most definitely read more and hadn't realised I'd commented previously on several of yours - perhaps before I realised there was a fav button. I am delighted there are corners of PS such as yours.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/2/2023 5:38:00 PM
A big thanks for your stamina in wading through the list. Appreciate the time, effort and interest...feel somewhat overwhelmed. Take care, Paul

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