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Stubborn, Proud Love

Down those cliffs above the sea, There are stones who stand unfree And in the sky there is a moon, Not to be free anytime soon. Hence, I stand in the door sill, Feeling nothing, yet tranquil. Left in pains of martyr’s height, Seeing nothing, but the light. Broken in this vile doorsill, Having nothing but this will, To finally find freedom to get in, To glance my eyes in the within. And so I stand in the door sill, Felling warmth and a great chill. And I should turn around to leave, But if I go, I’d go to grieve. Let me in, To what’s within. Stepping forward from the sill, On which loyally stood I so Still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/19/2018 11:33:00 AM
Maude, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/18/2018 7:28:00 AM
Its so beautiful and sad too, but full of hope as well. Love it.
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Maude Carthwright
Date: 1/23/2018 11:44:00 AM
Thank you very much, Hassana !

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