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Stubborn As a Mule (Sijo)

Mule kicked and bucked so high, its hind legs seemed to reach the sky... Suffering from many a thing, but vowed to suffer war no more, Soldiers differing with the stubborn beast, learned to sit in peace...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/22/2009 1:56:00 AM
Interesting write and form. Keep writing. Sara Thanks for the comments on my work.
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:37:00 AM
I like the twist in the last couple of lines. The internal rhyming pattern certainly give it a special kick. This one has a great sense of humor. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 4/28/2009 11:06:00 PM
Adell, it's well described and penned. Thank you for sharing. Friend in poetry, Ernilando
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Date: 4/16/2009 2:52:00 PM
Perhaps at times it seems animals are much wiser than us mere humans. We certainly might learn a thing or two. Well said! Love, Shar
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