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Stubborn

In pastoral lands With green fields abound And high hilltops to search and explore The old man sheep stubbornly stands All alone in wind and rain The shepherd looks on and idly wonders Whether the wether, will weather the weather, or whether the wether will not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/19/2013 8:27:00 PM
Nick, your tall grass story you posted a long time ago was a fave of mine. Sure would like to see it in my current contest!
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Date: 1/28/2011 1:36:00 PM
I love word play, makes one think! Light & Love
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Date: 4/8/2010 9:17:00 AM
If you change the last 2 lines these words will fit into something magic Amazing title I adore this sort of poetry you've got something special there man Work with it
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Date: 4/6/2010 7:24:00 AM
OH, that is kind of interesting. Almost like a footle!! Playing on that stubborn idea!! Actually, I already did a post of just ONE mere footle for the spring contest previous to posting the two parts. I believed I had to choose a spring footle becuase the title of the contest was April footle. So I hope I understood it right becuase gosh, the one I used was not as funny as some of my others! thanks for commenting, Nick. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/2/2010 2:09:00 PM
Great play on words and great alliteration...Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/1/2010 5:52:00 AM
confusable--funny
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