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An out on the porch few minutes..Sara
As the roosters greet the cool morn Flightless unable to soar Earthbound noisely let sun hear I'm here, I'm here such bore They strutt, throw chest out arrogant Are they impressing males Females or try to bolster self? Oh flightless bird what ails? The sun that peeked red between clouds Now is gold above mass Soon the cool of the morn will wilt; The roosters' crowing pass. The sounds of morn that saturate Enter my being, soul Soon will evaporate_dry_go Let moments in soul mould...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/20/2012 4:03:00 PM
painter of a morning scene in words, beautiful Sara. harry
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:42:00 PM
i love your morning scene.. glorious, glorious, sara... best wishes!... hugggs!
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:37:00 PM
sara you made me yearn for the morning. And how deep and well structured this poem is. Awesome write. RONNY
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Date: 5/20/2012 11:08:00 AM
yes, so true, my friend - let's enjoy life while we can
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:41:00 AM
Sara, I'm enjoying the rhymes in your poem.. thank you for sharing and expressing your poem with us. Take care~ Linda
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Date: 5/19/2012 12:56:00 PM
Great sound image, Sara. I can hear that dread rooster cry. Time to get up. Love, daver
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Date: 5/19/2012 12:04:00 PM
An unusual topic and good read... It brought back memories of my Aunts farm and her chickens that I helped keep.
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:38:00 AM
Sara, good way to start your day, thanks for your comments and I like the story of your neighbour...David
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