Strung Out

Round and round and round she goes
when will she stop nobody knows
cant she see her ship is sinking
what the hell is she thinking
all strung out on heroin
the tracks on her arms
I can tell how much the drugs have consumed her
so hoolow 
so empty
will she ver care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Maybe,we never know.The more spins does not mean it'll never stop.
Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 2:20 PM
This is getting to be a giant problem in America. I like your poem. Sara
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