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Struggle

Struggle
 
Let me see you resist
I have tied you naked
Taut between the line of bone and soft curve
I have done this
For my eyes to devour your beauty
 
And with a rampage tearing through my soul
My passion burns
To eat you, to touch you deep within
And be blessed I, by whimpers a soft supplicant moan
Struggle
 
Let me hear you cry out, let me feel those breathing gasps
As I taste the soft tender dew on your lips
And press to muscle and hard unyielding flesh
A grip for each sensuous and compliant contour
I shall take what is mine
 
Let me hear you refuse
Demure as your body flexes on the shackle
You ignite the blaze in my eye
And the blood in my veins
Struggle
 
And if I could I would force my mind to your thoughts
Hold every part of you to me
Complete, unflinching
Between body, rapine and surrender
All we are for this moment
 
Break me
And through the torrents release me
In a brutal tenderness
Curse me, foul mouthed and belligerent
Struggle
 
Quiver my lover in breathless tones
Cry to God, oh God! Oh-wa oh……! God!
Let this famished animal bare you away
Give up to me your subjugation
So naked, so exquisite, so heat of woman tied to my wall
 
So kneel now as I
Before these tumble bricks
These barriers, these bars, these fences of life
Let me hear you giggle in an exhausted sleep
A wisp of your hair left to………………
Struggle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/30/2008 2:51:00 PM
lovely erotic words
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Date: 10/15/2008 5:54:00 PM
Thanks for the comments as you can see I like a bit of this genre myself,though a bit more ...shall we say,delicacy in the wording but then i would expect a stronger ,more in demand view of erotic poetry from a man and you have managed this quite well,lol.May pennies fall from the sky!! Your friend in words,Lacy,
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Date: 10/14/2008 6:28:00 PM
WOW this is passionate writing for sure and "Free Verse" for the form ... smile ... maybe I should have been a school teacher always correcting but they won't include poems in contests or features of the week unless they include the Form ... this one left me exhausted ... LOL ... glad you're here at the best poetry site in town, Colin.
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Date: 10/14/2008 5:33:00 PM
Well [clears throught] quite a peice of fine erotica though may I make a suggestion? Leave out the 'oh god' part,perhaps cry to god your wanton pleasure or something of the like.I hope i have not offended you I absolutely love this peice and think it would flow better without the cry describe to me the cry dont do it,lol.Great write,poet.Many respects,Lacy,
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