Strudel

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12/9/2024 for Have a Very Foodie Christmas Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Stop! I found it in the bakery. See! It's not a cookie or a cakery. Sure, in a way, it's just like you - sweet and pretty through and through. So, I think I'll buy not one, but two - spilling apples bursting with flavor, something flaky we can savor.

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2024 12:12:00 AM

Dear david, i just googled strudel, and i regret now searching that. Haha. Left me hungry. Love your choice and how youv written too. And clever youv rhymed too. Best wishes. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

David Crandall
Date: 12/13/2024 9:09:00 AM

Hi Ink Empress! Thanks. I had just eaten some of that great pastry from a German restaurant when I wrote that, so it was on my mind - delicious!