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mint with a strong scent. showers forecasted today shards of solid rock

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/21/2022 12:22:00 PM

Your "Strong Shower" says so much. Love it and the picture. Have a great day............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2022 1:10:00 PM

would love to be there to smell the mint!!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/20/2022 9:03:00 AM

There is power in a poem and you have delivered. Stunning! :) Paulette

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2022 7:41:00 AM

- A beautiful and powerful sight ... (I saw it yesterday, before the storm came ashore ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/20/2022 1:50:00 AM

Sweetness can be deceptive at times, Lasaad, foreboding and the aftereffects tell the tale, nevertheless, mint is still welcoming. Your depiction is well-done, love the picture my friend, Aloha!

Anselmo Boles

Date: 1/20/2022 1:37:00 AM

The astonishing beauty and power of nature, described in three lines! Wonderful Lasaad!...ab

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/20/2022 12:28:00 AM

Great imagery. Strong rain can dislodge stones.

Valsa George

Date: 1/19/2022 8:51:00 PM

A melange of scenes melded into one ! Great Haiku, dear friend !

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/19/2022 8:31:00 PM

Reading this haiku has provided a rich sensory experience. A beautiful haiku, Lasaad.