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Strolling Through the Meadow

As I strolled through a small meadow A profound peace consumed my soul Felt serene; my heart was aglow As I strolled through a small meadow Blooming roses were in a row Basking in nature, I feel whole As I strolled through a small meadow A profound peace consumed my soul 09/20/2022 Contest: Triolet Sponsor: Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2022 12:26:00 AM

This is so very pretty!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2022 1:08:00 PM

Ahhh!! Thanks for sharing this contest entry and for stopping by my page. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Those trips out like that give us a sweet peace. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/18/2022 8:08:00 PM

This is so sweet Alexis, I love this gentle poem so filled with peace.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/3/2022 9:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Alexis. It was a very calm and peaceful read this morning. A poet friend in Texas , Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/25/2022 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A Beautiful/peaceful write. I love this one. Have a great/blessed day...................

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 8/25/2022 7:26:00 AM

Dear Alexis, This is a beautiful triolet. It would be just as gorgeous in the present tense. Congratulations on your fine win!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/25/2022 6:13:00 AM

A profound write Alexis. So beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2022 1:17:00 AM

Mother Nature always inspires and uplifts the soul Alexis. Beautifully expressed my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful First place win. Blessings xxoo