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Strolling In Autumnal Vibes

Oh! how gracefully the trees, flaunting splendor lilt Swaying autumn’s palettes in rhythms of winds ruby As the sun is setting, flaming glow of gamboge skies Amber breeze is blushing rosy glimmer of eventide And robins are excavating pecking on decaying lawn Where ducks are ambling, ogling seductive bond Amid people strolling, pausing to gaze at opaline arc Floating crimson filaments on tinted purple canvas Enhanced by falling colors whirling mellowed vibes In twilight’s golden ambiance alluring romantic eyes Gleam of eve’s fading, ceding reign to peeking moon As scent of you appeals, quiescently enveloping me Enchanting where I sit, under twinkling stellar magic Enticed by euphony of mockingbird’s sensuous song Articulating for me eloquently, love is never too far When autumn blazes passions titillating lovers’ hearts October 20, 2021 Placed 1st: Let’s Mix It Up Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Theme: Nature Unrhymed couplet/Unrhymed imagism/Free verse

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2021 1:23:00 PM

dropping back with many congrats on your win xx

Valsa George

Date: 11/8/2021 6:30:00 PM

Absolutely brilliant ! Your poem is indeed a kaleidoscope of colours as Autumn itself !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2021 1:21:00 PM

Thank you Valsa. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/5/2021 10:56:00 PM

Your outstanding poetry always speaks to my romantic heart Vijay. “Amid people strolling, pausing to gaze at opaline arc Floating crimson filaments on tinted purple canvas Enhanced by falling colors whirling mellowed vibes In twilight’s golden ambiance alluring romantic eyes”. Your passionate poetry reminds me of Lord Byron. This is a special gift I am saving and Faving my friend. Thank you! Congratulations on your most deserving First placement! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2021 7:17:00 AM

So nice to hear--especially from a talented writer like you, Connie. Much appreciate your wonderful comments. Many thanks my friend. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Constance La France

Date: 11/4/2021 2:26:00 PM

Vijay, awesome write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2021 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Constance. Much appreciate your kind remarks and investing your time in hosting contests.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/2/2021 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful autumn story/write. I am one of the people strolling in your autumn breeze and feeding the ducks. Have a blessed autumn day with your win...............

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2021 1:01:00 PM

Glad you strolled through autumn of this write. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Paula. Many thanks.

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/1/2021 8:16:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously experience the delight Autumn brings... since I live in an "Autumnless" country. God bless you.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2021 1:00:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Beata. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2021 1:12:00 PM

Gorgeous work as always, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2021 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/30/2021 11:47:00 PM

An elevating feeling with the autumn. Beautiful narration. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2021 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/30/2021 6:27:00 PM

Dreamy beauty flows effortlessly from your golden pen, Vijay. Such striking and romantic imagery ignites the heart and the imagination in the most delicious and delightful way. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes, dear friend.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2021 6:37:00 AM

So very kind of you my friend. Always a joy when you visit and a delight to read your valued feedback. Much appreciate Susan. Many thanks.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/30/2021 2:36:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful poetry Vijay, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest, well done… Belle

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2021 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Belle--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Charles Messina

Date: 10/25/2021 4:49:00 PM

Beautifully written, V.J., A masterful piece!!! best wishes in the contest...Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2021 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Charles. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/24/2021 9:50:00 AM

Vijay, beautiful and moving piece. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Paulette

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2021 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Paulette--much appreciate.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/24/2021 1:16:00 AM

This is beautiful on several counts, Vijay. The autumnal vibes can be felt in the striking imagery at which you are a master! ~ Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2021 9:31:00 AM

Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/23/2021 4:57:00 PM

Vijay: Another beautiful fall poem. I ….got lost in the lovely Autumn imagery. SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2021 9:30:00 AM

Thank you SuZ--much appreciate.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/23/2021 9:56:00 AM

Lovely imagery Vijay, such good insightfulness too. A blessed read, blessings,Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2021 9:30:00 AM

Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback, Gordon. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 10/23/2021 7:40:00 AM

Beautiful imagery of autumn colors bursting forth, Well written Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2021 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/22/2021 9:19:00 AM

Your poetry titillates my heart Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2021 11:32:00 AM

So very kind of you, Vienna. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/22/2021 8:23:00 AM

Ah such beauty, charm and splendor to this poetic creative write, romance always present within such brilliance and seductive Autumn sights. Hugs and blessings dear Vijay, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2021 11:32:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Jennifer with your kind feedback. Much appreciate your visit and feedback. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2021 7:58:00 AM

Oh so beautiful and peaceful Vijay.! Well written. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2021 11:31:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. Much appreciate, as always. You have a great day!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/21/2021 8:29:00 PM

Wow soo charmingly romantic and autumn colours painted in words. Your word choice is impressive. Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2021 6:24:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, S. zaynab. many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/21/2021 11:52:00 AM

This is so beautiful and dreamy, so tender and romantic. The images you paint are simply breathtaking. Autumn is here and I am embracing its sweet magic. Oh my ! I am caressing your thoughts softly around me. Just because. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2021 2:18:00 PM

So very kind of you to say so my friend. Your complimentary feedback is much appreciated. Always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks, Brandy.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/21/2021 4:24:00 AM

And your beautiful verses ' articulating for me eloquently', autumn is the most beautiful season... Thoroughly enjoyed reading ... Thanks for sharing...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2021 5:27:00 AM

So glad you liked the poem, Supraja. Nature is your kind of poem. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always. Many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/21/2021 3:26:00 AM

I see a stunning Autumn painting of an Artist who masters his brush.. I marvel at the wonders of the natural Autumn scenery invoked by your poetic artistry.. I feel the enchantment of the "lovers' hearts"! What a gem of rarity I hold dear into my fave list! You amaze with your poetic feel and mastery, dear Vijay! A praiseworthy work of Art and truly a treat to read! Deserving of an outstanding placement! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2021 5:25:00 AM

That is so very kind of you, Besma. Always a joy to read your detailed feedback and your complimentary remarks. Much appreciate your visit--many thanks. I truly appreciate your FAVE as well--special thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/20/2021 7:04:00 PM

What beautiful autumnal imagery, Vijay; you've meticulously crafted both realistic and magnificent poem in its poignant portrayal of the remarkable season. This charming poem is densely packed with kind words, poetic symbolism, explicit imagery, and a diverse range of typical settings. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes for the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2021 5:23:00 AM

So glad to read your complimentary feedback, Lasaad. Much appreciate, as always, your valued feedback. Many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/20/2021 10:40:00 AM

A beautiful write so descriptive and exquisite Vijayji..."... floating crimson filaments on tinted purple canvas enhanced by falling colors... "... Loved this...precise images... Best wishes... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2021 1:48:00 PM

Delighted by your visit and your detailed feedback, Ani. Glad you liked the imagery. Good to hear from someone who writes wonderful poems. Many thanks.