Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Strolling In Autumnal Vibes

Oh! how gracefully the trees, flaunting splendor lilt
Swaying autumn’s palettes in rhythms of winds ruby 

As the sun is setting, flaming glow of gamboge skies
Amber breeze is blushing rosy glimmer of eventide
And robins are excavating pecking on decaying lawn
Where ducks are ambling, ogling seductive bond
Amid people strolling, pausing to gaze at opaline arc
Floating crimson filaments on tinted purple canvas
Enhanced by falling colors whirling mellowed vibes
In twilight’s golden ambiance alluring romantic eyes

Gleam of eve’s fading, ceding reign to peeking moon
As scent of you appeals, quiescently enveloping me
Enchanting where I sit, under twinkling stellar magic
Enticed by euphony of mockingbird’s sensuous song
Articulating for me eloquently, love is never too far
When autumn blazes passions titillating lovers’ hearts

October 20, 2021
Placed 1st: Let’s Mix It Up Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme: Nature
Unrhymed couplet/Unrhymed imagism/Free verse

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Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 1:23 PM dropping back with many congrats on your win xx

Valsa George November 8, 2021 at 6:30 PM Absolutely brilliant ! Your poem is indeed a kaleidoscope of colours as Autumn itself ! Vijay Pandit November 9, 2021 at 1:21 PM Thank you Valsa. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong November 5, 2021 at 10:56 PM Your outstanding poetry always speaks to my romantic heart Vijay. “Amid people strolling, pausing to gaze at opaline arc Floating crimson filaments on tinted purple canvas Enhanced by falling colors whirling mellowed vibes In twilight’s golden ambiance alluring romantic eyes”. Your passionate poetry reminds me of Lord Byron. This is a special gift I am saving and Faving my friend. Thank you! Congratulations on your most deserving First placement! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit November 7, 2021 at 7:17 AM So nice to hear--especially from a talented writer like you, Connie. Much appreciate your wonderful comments. Many thanks my friend. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Constance La France November 4, 2021 at 2:26 PM Vijay, awesome write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Vijay Pandit November 7, 2021 at 7:15 AM Thank you Constance. Much appreciate your kind remarks and investing your time in hosting contests.

Paula Goldsmith November 2, 2021 at 8:20 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful autumn story/write. I am one of the people strolling in your autumn breeze and feeding the ducks. Have a blessed autumn day with your win............... Vijay Pandit November 2, 2021 at 1:01 PM Glad you strolled through autumn of this write. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Paula. Many thanks.

Beata Agustin November 1, 2021 at 8:16 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously experience the delight Autumn brings... since I live in an "Autumnless" country. God bless you. Vijay Pandit November 2, 2021 at 1:00 PM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Beata. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2021 at 1:12 PM Gorgeous work as always, Vijay Vijay Pandit November 2, 2021 at 12:59 PM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Christuraj Alex October 30, 2021 at 11:47 PM An elevating feeling with the autumn. Beautiful narration. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit October 31, 2021 at 6:35 AM Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate.

Susan Ashley October 30, 2021 at 6:27 PM Dreamy beauty flows effortlessly from your golden pen, Vijay. Such striking and romantic imagery ignites the heart and the imagination in the most delicious and delightful way. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes, dear friend.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit October 31, 2021 at 6:37 AM So very kind of you my friend. Always a joy when you visit and a delight to read your valued feedback. Much appreciate Susan. Many thanks.

Beryl Edmonds October 30, 2021 at 2:36 AM Absolutely beautiful poetry Vijay, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest, well done… Belle Vijay Pandit October 30, 2021 at 6:39 AM Thank you Belle--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Charles Messina October 25, 2021 at 4:49 PM Beautifully written, V.J., A masterful piece!!! best wishes in the contest...Charlie Vijay Pandit October 30, 2021 at 6:38 AM Thank you Charles. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Paulette Calasibetta October 24, 2021 at 9:50 AM Vijay, beautiful and moving piece. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Paulette Vijay Pandit October 25, 2021 at 6:45 AM Thank you Paulette--much appreciate.

Paul Callus October 24, 2021 at 1:16 AM This is beautiful on several counts, Vijay. The autumnal vibes can be felt in the striking imagery at which you are a master! ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit October 24, 2021 at 9:31 AM Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.

Suzanne Delaney October 23, 2021 at 4:57 PM Vijay: Another beautiful fall poem. I ….got lost in the lovely Autumn imagery. SuZ Vijay Pandit October 24, 2021 at 9:30 AM Thank you SuZ--much appreciate.

Gordon Mcconnell October 23, 2021 at 9:56 AM Lovely imagery Vijay, such good insightfulness too. A blessed read, blessings,Gordon Vijay Pandit October 24, 2021 at 9:30 AM Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback, Gordon. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May October 23, 2021 at 7:40 AM Beautiful imagery of autumn colors bursting forth, Well written Vijay Vijay Pandit October 24, 2021 at 9:30 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose October 22, 2021 at 9:19 AM Your poetry titillates my heart Vijay :) Vijay Pandit October 22, 2021 at 11:32 AM So very kind of you, Vienna. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos October 22, 2021 at 8:23 AM Ah such beauty, charm and splendor to this poetic creative write, romance always present within such brilliance and seductive Autumn sights. Hugs and blessings dear Vijay, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit October 22, 2021 at 11:32 AM Glad you stopped by Jennifer with your kind feedback. Much appreciate your visit and feedback. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands October 22, 2021 at 7:58 AM Oh so beautiful and peaceful Vijay.! Well written. I hope you have a nice day :) Vijay Pandit October 22, 2021 at 11:31 AM Thank you Heidi. Much appreciate, as always. You have a great day!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 21, 2021 at 8:29 PM Wow soo charmingly romantic and autumn colours painted in words. Your word choice is impressive. Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too Vijay Pandit October 22, 2021 at 6:24 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, S. zaynab. many thanks.

Brandy Nicole October 21, 2021 at 11:52 AM This is so beautiful and dreamy, so tender and romantic. The images you paint are simply breathtaking. Autumn is here and I am embracing its sweet magic. Oh my ! I am caressing your thoughts softly around me. Just because. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 21, 2021 at 2:18 PM So very kind of you to say so my friend. Your complimentary feedback is much appreciated. Always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks, Brandy.

Supraja Kannan October 21, 2021 at 4:24 AM And your beautiful verses ' articulating for me eloquently', autumn is the most beautiful season... Thoroughly enjoyed reading ... Thanks for sharing... Vijay Pandit October 21, 2021 at 5:27 AM So glad you liked the poem, Supraja. Nature is your kind of poem. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always. Many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri October 21, 2021 at 3:26 AM I see a stunning Autumn painting of an Artist who masters his brush.. I marvel at the wonders of the natural Autumn scenery invoked by your poetic artistry.. I feel the enchantment of the "lovers' hearts"! What a gem of rarity I hold dear into my fave list! You amaze with your poetic feel and mastery, dear Vijay! A praiseworthy work of Art and truly a treat to read! Deserving of an outstanding placement! My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit October 21, 2021 at 5:25 AM That is so very kind of you, Besma. Always a joy to read your detailed feedback and your complimentary remarks. Much appreciate your visit--many thanks. I truly appreciate your FAVE as well--special thanks.

Sotto Poet October 20, 2021 at 7:04 PM What beautiful autumnal imagery, Vijay; you've meticulously crafted both realistic and magnificent poem in its poignant portrayal of the remarkable season. This charming poem is densely packed with kind words, poetic symbolism, explicit imagery, and a diverse range of typical settings. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes for the contest. Vijay Pandit October 21, 2021 at 5:23 AM So glad to read your complimentary feedback, Lasaad. Much appreciate, as always, your valued feedback. Many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar October 20, 2021 at 10:40 AM A beautiful write so descriptive and exquisite Vijayji..."... floating crimson filaments on tinted purple canvas enhanced by falling colors... "... Loved this...precise images... Best wishes... ~ Ani Vijay Pandit October 20, 2021 at 1:48 PM Delighted by your visit and your detailed feedback, Ani. Glad you liked the imagery. Good to hear from someone who writes wonderful poems. Many thanks.

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