Eve Roper Poet Tanka

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Strive For New Beginning - Syllables of Wisdom 3

bleak tunnels hunger

for the slightest of sunshine

chip  into the rock

unleash the beast from its pit

quench it with sunshine’s embrace


1/18/2016


Poetry Contest ; Syllables of Wisdom 3 -  
 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 8:45 PM EVE, Congratulations on your "Syllables of Wisdom 3 WIN." Hugs. LINDA -

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2016 at 7:32 PM this is so awesome, Eve. Some of my favorites are the bottom ones. hahaha (it's funny how sometimes I feel so differently from some of the judges)

Beautiful Scars January 21, 2016 at 1:48 PM Back to say congrats Eve! *smiles* -luloo

Skat A January 21, 2016 at 12:36 PM EVE, congratulations on your Syllables of Wisdom 3 win. *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 4:44 AM Congrats on ur very wise winning write Eve! Great tanka!

Poet Destroyer A January 20, 2016 at 7:22 PM A wonderful write Eve, LINDA

CayCay Godwin January 18, 2016 at 9:35 PM Well done, Eve - deep - good luck in the contest ... CayCay Eve Roper January 21, 2016 at 1:20 PM Thank you, CayCay, :)

Beautiful Scars January 18, 2016 at 8:08 PM I love this wisdom Sandra, so true..7! Good luck! *smiles* -luloo Eve Roper January 21, 2016 at 1:20 PM Thank you, Laura, a booboo... I'm eve :) I know I've done it too.....

Nette Onclaud January 18, 2016 at 12:44 PM we will always have fresh starts.. enjoyed this radiant piece filled with hope, eve.. huggs Eve Roper January 18, 2016 at 1:48 PM Thank you, Nette, so much, your comments are always inspiring for growth. Hugs dear friend

Eric Boddie January 18, 2016 at 11:44 AM the embrace of sunshine will always find a way to intertwine every heart truly kind delivering peace to the mind resting on that thin line to leave negativity behind from now until the end of time....very inspiring eve......;) Eve Roper January 18, 2016 at 1:45 PM Eric, I'm going to have to save all your comments they are so inspirational, Thank you so much