Strive For Immortality

The knowledge that you gained
The money that you amassed
The fame that you won
Would be left behind

The body thinking of which you spend your life
The family for which you dedicated your life
The world which you gave more importance than self
Would be left behind

Everything is dynamic everything transient
Every second a new world born
Nothing is permanent everything dying
With death all left behind

Attached to temporary objects
Our self lost in serving them
When will we live for self?

Attached to fleeting  thoughts
Swaying with them
Living in emotions, forgetting the moment
One day we disappear from the scene

That which remains is soul
Waiting for new skin
A new picture

Our good deeds remembered
But of no value to us
As soul we regret forgetting self

Based on karmas another birth
Endless cycle of mortal life
Regretting every time at death
Stupidity going on since eternity

Why not end this movie once for all
Think and live for soul
Liberate it through salvation

Use brains for something  worthwhile
Reflect on your real goal in life
All scriptures state the same
All cannot be wrong at the same time

If you feel they are not right,
Is attachment to temporary things right?
Is having expectations from uncertain right?

Living for selfish humans who use you
Cry how they'll survive when you die
Not much enjoying 
is this intelligent living?
Is this right?

Isn't world selfish? Isn't all transitory?
To be attached to mortal world
is it not stupidity?

Seek that which is immortal
Attach to it for eternal benefit
Serve it, please it, become immortal

24.07.2021
For Chantelle Anne Cooke, IMMORTALITY YES OR NO

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/23/2021 7:14:00 PM
An incredible write. "That which remains is soul Waiting for new skin A new picture" So empathetic and correct!
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