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Strip Them Bone Dry

Strip them bone dry
Of myth
And find
How suddenly we all are blind
For man must believe
In something more than
Mere measurements
When all tangible visions
Like twin towers fall
In the audible abyss
Of their faith.
This self 
From the serpent spiraled tree
Before the ashes
Of the Enlightenment
Fed us gall
This self
So longed to become
What it could not see
And raptured in rebellion
Brooked no authority at all.
I cannot subscribe
To myth as my alternative
To paradise
But I will something
Like an umbrella
Under which insecurity could crawl
Measure how finite
It compares to the infinity
Of its belief
And tumble down its Babel again
In utter delight
To tongue the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/29/2009 9:17:00 AM
"to tongue the rain" Reads as good as the vision creates. Vicious yet victorious. Awesome stuff L'nass. I just joined so I'm hoping to check up on all the great work from you and everyone else on here. Great read!
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Date: 12/26/2009 9:54:00 PM
This is almost epic! Well done.
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Date: 12/26/2009 1:06:00 PM
hot last line there Rasta man ;) Light & Love
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Date: 12/26/2009 9:37:00 AM
Your choice of structure demands the reader's focus much like guiding ones hand to the knife's edge. As I read I felt the blooming of many topics as I found my way down the underlying path. A very strong statement indeed. Well done, L'nass. Thanks for sharing and thank you agian for your many comments. You do my humble poetry much credit, an honor from an artist such as yourself. Hope you have a happy holiday.
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Date: 12/26/2009 8:09:00 AM
Lines 13,14,15,16 hooked me big time! Great poem . excellent, L'nass! thanks for sharing this one. Robert
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