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Strip Them Bone Dry

Strip them bone dry Of myth And find How suddenly we all are blind For man must believe In something more than Mere measurements When all tangible visions Like twin towers fall In the audible abyss Of their faith. This self From the serpent spiraled tree Before the ashes Of the Enlightenment Fed us gall This self So longed to become What it could not see And raptured in rebellion Brooked no authority at all. I cannot subscribe To myth as my alternative To paradise But I will something Like an umbrella Under which insecurity could crawl Measure how finite It compares to the infinity Of its belief And tumble down its Babel again In utter delight To tongue the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/29/2009 9:17:00 AM
"to tongue the rain" Reads as good as the vision creates. Vicious yet victorious. Awesome stuff L'nass. I just joined so I'm hoping to check up on all the great work from you and everyone else on here. Great read!
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Date: 12/26/2009 9:54:00 PM
This is almost epic! Well done.
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Date: 12/26/2009 1:06:00 PM
hot last line there Rasta man ;) Light & Love
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Date: 12/26/2009 9:37:00 AM
Your choice of structure demands the reader's focus much like guiding ones hand to the knife's edge. As I read I felt the blooming of many topics as I found my way down the underlying path. A very strong statement indeed. Well done, L'nass. Thanks for sharing and thank you agian for your many comments. You do my humble poetry much credit, an honor from an artist such as yourself. Hope you have a happy holiday.
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Date: 12/26/2009 8:09:00 AM
Lines 13,14,15,16 hooked me big time! Great poem . excellent, L'nass! thanks for sharing this one. Robert
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