Pat Adams Poet Quatrain

Strip Down

I went up, to the cashier
With my bank card in my hand
She said, "Strip down facing me"
Something I'd misunderstand

"Right now and here?", I asked her
Modesty held me askew
She said, "If you want service,"
"That is what you'll have to do!"

The look on her face told me
She'd not wait a minute more
So I undid my trousers
And they fell down to the floor!

Then she rolled her eyes and said,
Words much to my chagrin
She said, "Strip down facing me,"
"Is how, your card go's in!

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Jean Murray August 30, 2019 at 4:16 PM That's the funniest thing I ever saw... .poem I mean Pat Adams August 30, 2019 at 5:30 PM Well thank you very much Jean. I appreciate that!.....pat

Jan Allison August 30, 2019 at 5:33 AM so lovely to see this featured on the home page, I do love this witty poem Pat:-) hugs Jan xx Pat Adams August 30, 2019 at 8:03 AM Thanks again Jan. I hope you have a great day!.....pat

Ann Foster August 30, 2019 at 2:38 AM Haha... love this.. hehe... Ann Pat Adams August 30, 2019 at 7:51 AM Well I love getting a hehe from a sheshe or a himhim for that matter. Thanks for commenting (and heheing too!)....pat

Hello There August 29, 2019 at 9:40 PM Glad yours was a featured poem right on the home page. I'm still finding my way around, and I'm thrilled to know where the party's at ;) Pat Adams August 30, 2019 at 7:50 AM Great way to put it. Have you ever thought about being a poet? Wait, oh never mind! Thanks for commenting!!.....80)

Caren Krutsinger August 29, 2019 at 10:40 AM Hilarious! I get this and I had to laugh. Pat Adams August 29, 2019 at 4:16 PM Thank you Caren. That means a lot from a long time poet as yourself................pat

Ilene Bauer August 29, 2019 at 10:20 AM Very funny, Pat! So clever! Pat Adams August 29, 2019 at 4:15 PM Thanks Ilene. I guess I have a funny bone, or two!...pat

Gershon Wolf July 18, 2019 at 6:13 PM Just another day at the office. Ho-hum. Hilarious, Pat. Best wishes, gw Pat Adams July 19, 2019 at 4:31 PM Seemed like an understandable misunderstanding to me!............80)

Michelle Faulkner July 16, 2019 at 3:25 PM What I want to know is, what were you buying that was so important you 'striped down' for it? Pat Adams July 16, 2019 at 5:42 PM In all honesty I'd probably strip down for anything. I have no shame!...............80)

Jan Allison July 11, 2019 at 5:57 AM Oh so witty I can just picture the scene Pat lol:-) hugs jan xx Pat Adams July 11, 2019 at 9:16 AM Thanks Jan. Sometimes you just have to roll with it!...........80}

Lindsay Laurie July 10, 2019 at 8:41 PM G'day Pat … the modern jargon is peril to us oldies. What's the prison food like Pat? Lindsay Pat Adams July 11, 2019 at 9:17 AM All carbs dog!! I mean......uh......I got off! (Too small of an offense).......80(