Strings

Almost too disgusting to look at Bleehh they're so nasty! Change is soon to come Delight rushing through my veins Excitement for the sound still unknown Feeling the crispness of the new metal Getting the cords and pedal ready.. Here goes nothing

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2009 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Captain. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 12/21/2009 10:15:00 PM

Glad to see you entered this one Captain Dan. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 8:30:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 9:47:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Donna Golden

Date: 10/22/2009 10:11:00 PM

I have to wonder if this is literal or figurative....either way, it's a well done piece that grabs the reader right away and keeps one's attention even when it is finished. "Here goes nothing". I wonder how it turned out! Take care, Donna

Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2009 5:01:00 PM

What instrument might this be, Captain Dan? I am curious. Lainie

James Fraser

Date: 10/19/2009 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/18/2009 5:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Captain. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 10/16/2009 8:12:00 AM

Enjoyed all your poems...Marty

Shirley Madeleine

Date: 10/3/2009 11:18:00 AM

Nice one. Absolutely love it.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2009 5:54:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Captain. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol