Stringed Mandolin

The land calls my name, deep inside the bowels Working the strips of fabric that installs Patience builds up where wind blows beyond time Lips tell stories but won’t work in the rhyme Severed is the black hair off her white skin Opened her heart, the day’s cool air within Leaves tumble and shake away from the trees Clouds play their music with delicate ease Liquefy my eyes, gone through broken glass Sifting through the polished sand I won’t pass First score comes in, playing my eyes digress Lowered below feelings of some sundress By love I sit with a stringed mandolin And life strokes a chord of dandelion
Contest: Any Subject, Any Form - New Poems Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot 11/12/2013
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November 20, 2013 at 8:12 PM
Russell, , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 7:28 PM
Fantastic finale [life strokes a chord of dandelion] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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November 15, 2013 at 5:18 PM
I thought this was a stunning sonnet, full of unique imagery, some very unusual wording - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:54 PM
gosh, this is very creative. It seems metaphorical to me. That is very interesting line about black hair severed from white skin!
Sathasivam Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:49 PM
Excellent. Very creative work. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
A   Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Russell, the imagery is gripping... enjoyed the tale, nice ending... wishing you luck with your wonderful poem.... good night... xox~ LINDA
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November 12, 2013 at 1:23 PM
Beautiful sonnet by you here Russell.Enjoyed the read.
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November 12, 2013 at 5:00 AM
Creative work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page..We are suppose to get freezing weather tonight first of the season..Sara
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