String of Not-Not & Not"s

STRING of not-not & NOT"S

Stuck on you like dirt on a shoe.
You got me rocking like a cradle
Passing you a sigh look, and you still have no clue.
Giving me all the motions of a tornado.
Have you no idea how much I am into you.
I am like pudding while you clay me like playdoo.
Now tell me what is a girl in love suppose to do.
Without knowing if that is the way you feel to.

You have no idea you are!!!!!!!!! 
Possessing me from the other side.
Deep is how I fallen into your trap.
Illusions of you is what I thrive.
Giving me a sucker, while you kidnap.
Bathing me with your strong ego set on overdrive.
Your bait came like cheese on a mouse trap.
Tripping with a fall into your arms.
For you I run that extra lap.
Hitting me hard with your sweet charm.
Around your finger you got me wrap.
Your percept comes with the ability to burn.
Your amusing even when you talk crap.
Drawing in a moment when its my turn.
Separated  when the night takes a nap.
I talk I listen, I am lost in your yearn to learn.
A path of pebbles I follow to your so called scrap.
You got my guts tide up in no's & NOT'S
Stringed up and all tied up, NOT easy for me to unstrap
Strung out on you NOT wanting a way to unsnap.
Wink, wink, to he who I will NOT give up ; - ) !!!

By: P.D.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Goff Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 6:51 AM
very cool womans perspective pd! jim
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 9:23 PM
How cute :)
Davis Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 8:42 AM
Linda This is a deep and interesting write. I could feel your desire for this person you are longing for without knowing if they feel the same way. And the metaphors in some of your lines are very creative. Nice job Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 11:49 AM
I see I chose this last time I came here to tell you something!! well, just stopped to say hello. time for my friday movie day and I'm OFF!!! Luv ,Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 10:56 PM
pd, I have to finally get off here, but why don't you give the LPM to your sister since she is blogging about needing a membership to stay on here with her contest!!
Scott Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 12:15 PM
thats what i hate not knowing if feelings are mutal love the words tornado and play doe i think some people try to mould you in to what they want you to be what i like about youis you have strength of charater lovley poem linda xx davidscott
Horsman Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 10:50 AM
lucky guy thats all i can say, was this Nathan? like the poem,, in fact it's awesome...
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Sad that you are strung out and about to snap..Don't do like the tv program "Snapped"..I wouldn't want that for you..Sara
D. Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 10:41 AM
good thing i m so charming others wise you would have kicked me to the curb long ago. oi but i can be stupid sometimes ove you xoxoxoxoxoxox
Chachere Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 9:15 PM
that so sweet! if a girl is in love with this special man she should show him why she feels this way, and everything he has that makes her have these feelings for him. and if he understands it, thats great, and if he doesn't want to, then that must be his lose, ~Always&Forever Lynette
Semeniuk Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 9:12 AM
niice poem!..
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 8:18 PM
P.D. I was thinking that was who you meant since she is so cucoo or haiku. That is so funny I did her poem too! Luv Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 7:19 AM
Great new contest P.D. my BBF and good luck .. I already submitted my entry your Unicorn Haiku.. and now how about trying my Heavenly Haiku ..a two day quick contest till I do my next collaboration contest with another poetess? it will be fun to see u enter .. my BBF as u are an excellent poet... ess.... with luv.. your BBF...
K. Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 1:53 AM
just dropping by to say hi & good afternoon! trying to catch up with my comments for now....
Neels Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Off to bed to try and sleep before my alarm goes.. I've send you sm, tc Wilma
Boy Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Sounds like a knock knock joke with koolness. P.J.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 4:59 AM
you've got to tell!! you have let the cat out of the bag! and he is gnawing on my leg and memory!
Brumley Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 4:26 PM
Hmmm, maybe you should play just a little hard to get and see if he notices. Or, you could just slap the crap out of him and scream, "NOTICE ME YOU FOOL!" That might work!:)
Knop Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 6:46 AM
Hope you'll be in a better mood right now, p.d.! Enjoyed reading you poem today, awesome write and thank you for your recent comments! Wishiing you a nice and another creative week...Gert
Trevino Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Lol pd love your writes =(^.^)=Royal
A  Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 6:23 PM
PLAYING oUT YoUR WoRDS LoVE IT.-SKAT
Gelb Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Nice poem. And thanks for mine.
Keogh Jr. Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 4:30 PM
And may I return the compliment. You have the NATURAL talent in this genre. I couldn't even hope to compete. Intense. Regards from Gerard
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 3:20 PM
Cute one, P.D. and I loved your play on the word not for love knots. (SM!)
Cobb Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:17 PM
hey i just wanted to leave an extended compliment on yahoo first. this was incredible. you have a great talent p.d. keep writing. keep slamming.
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