Strikingly Beautiful

it was a strikingly strange day! it rained pitter patter in the morning, it rained drip drop in the afternoon, but it did not rain at all in between! 

ruby-red sun was up, the mellifluous birds started chirping, I felt I could rest in the warmth of magnificent sun, and watch my demure white Jasmine. it looked so elegant like a ravishing bride, waiting with beating heart for her beloved to arrive. pretty  bridesmaids were the frolicking tulips in gorgeous red and yellow outfit.

it was a strange day, but it was a perfect day with the full-throated robins crooning a magical sonata, the fresh rain-showered green lawn to tread, as soft as blushing petals of rose. I am sure my graceful Jasmine felt she had nothing more to ask for!
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La France Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 3:22 PM
Mala, you paint a beautiful image with your lovely words and I just love this poem, a FAV ~ love and serenity _Constance
Kiser Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 9:28 PM
Quite a smooth and beautiful penning.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet, for visiting my poem. Your kind comments inspire me. BW ~ Mala
Peck Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 9:11 AM
So beautiful and colorful, Mala. It gives one serenity. Have a lovely day.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Dear Ann, thank you so much. Glad you liked it! Love ~ Mala
Callus Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:47 AM
I would say that it was a strikingly beautiful day, Mala...the same as your delightful poem! That morning shower made nature look absolutely gorgeous. ~ Warm regards // paul
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Dear Paul. Your lovely comments inspire me. BW ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Hello Mala,you painted a beautiful scene with your words about nature. Love & friendship. Hugs.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Thanks, Darlene, very kind of you. Love ~ Mala
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