Strikingly Beautiful

it was a strikingly strange day! it rained pitter patter in the morning, it rained drip drop in the afternoon, but it did not rain at all in between! 

ruby-red sun was up, the mellifluous birds started chirping, I felt I could rest in the warmth of magnificent sun, and watch my demure white Jasmine. it looked so elegant like a ravishing bride, waiting with beating heart for her beloved to arrive. pretty  bridesmaids were the frolicking tulips in gorgeous red and yellow outfit.

it was a strange day, but it was a perfect day with the full-throated robins crooning a magical sonata, the fresh rain-showered green lawn to tread, as soft as blushing petals of rose. I am sure my graceful Jasmine felt she had nothing more to ask for!

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Constance La France

Date: 7/1/2021 3:22:00 PM

Mala, you paint a beautiful image with your lovely words and I just love this poem, a FAV ~ love and serenity _Constance

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 9:28:00 PM

Quite a smooth and beautiful penning.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/28/2021 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Poet, for visiting my poem. Your kind comments inspire me. BW ~ Mala

Ann Peck

Date: 6/24/2021 9:11:00 AM

So beautiful and colorful, Mala. It gives one serenity. Have a lovely day.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/28/2021 6:59:00 AM

Dear Ann, thank you so much. Glad you liked it! Love ~ Mala

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2021 7:47:00 AM

I would say that it was a strikingly beautiful day, Mala...the same as your delightful poem! That morning shower made nature look absolutely gorgeous. ~ Warm regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/28/2021 7:01:00 AM

Thanks, Dear Paul. Your lovely comments inspire me. BW ~ Mala