Striking Out

The color of lemonade washing the sky—
Popsicle memories revive
Of  baseball connecting with ash wood, hit high
In an arcing, outfield drive.

Are summers forever?  Or only a day?
Moth-eaten , major-league hat…
December’s the umpire, miscalling the play,
And there’s ice on my Louisville bat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Hey Steve, congratulations on your win in the contest. Peace, Audrey
Anderson Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Hey Steve, Congratulations o your win in the contest. ...Jimmy
Dufresne Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 5:31 AM
very very well done Steve. Game on poetic! congrats on well deserved win!
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:28 AM
Wow! Awesome write congrats on the success in the contest!
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February 18, 2010 at 3:25 AM
Bravo and drum rolls! Steven, your poem is the 2nd place winner in the Poetry Soup member contest SPORT'S MAD? Sponsored by: Brian Strand. Good dreams are forever...Well done! Smiles, Dane Ann
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 4:43 PM
Quite an enjoyable picture you've painted! Congratulations on your winning poem! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 4:39 PM
Steve congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, mj
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:41 AM
wonderful writing. No wonder you won. congratulations. Joyce
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 11:35 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian
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July 11, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Congrats Steve on your win. When the ice starts melting, time to head for the field. Vince
Goff Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 6:52 AM
well done Steve! congrats on your winning verse!! I remember an old bat I used when I was a kid...it broke a couple-times, and I kept nailin' it back together!!! jim
Strand Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:20 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Steve.Rgds Brian
Guzzi Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 2:30 PM
wonderful very evocative....love those popsicles I haven't had one in years!!! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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July 10, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative perspective. Congratulations on your first place finish in Matt's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Excellent job! Congratulations on a winning poem!! ~ Carrie
Shango Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 12:16 PM
Beautiful! A truly artistic write. Bravo
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