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the water strider
skims the creek - constant coaxing 
concentric circles



6/23/2022
Summer Nature Themed Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Used HMS 5/7/5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/8/2022 3:11:00 AM
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Back with congrats. Way to go. I like this insect's abilities. Sara
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2022 7:22:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win and this beautiful haiku my dear friend Kim! Thanks a lot for sharing. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2022 10:04:00 AM
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Thank you most kindly, my friend!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/4/2022 4:53:00 PM
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Congrats on the win, Kim. I can really picture this even without the picture!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 5:55:00 PM
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Thanks! This pic was from pixabay…what I saw was cooler :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/4/2022 7:57:00 AM
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Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 8:41:00 AM
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Thank you, Tania! Something I saw that day. I had to look up and see what they were.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/4/2022 5:30:00 AM
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Oh so many of the little guys around my area. I could spend hours watching them. Nice alliteration! Congratulations Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 5:43:00 AM
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Thank you, Linda! :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/4/2022 4:55:00 AM
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"concentric circles" - Great work of the small creature. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 5:43:00 AM
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A joy to watch! Thank you, Christuraj!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/29/2022 6:50:00 AM
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lovely ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2022 6:56:00 AM
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Thank you so much! How fun it was to catch this sighting with my grandsons! I had to look up what they were.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/28/2022 5:05:00 AM
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Another great one Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2022 12:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Linda!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/23/2022 3:09:00 PM
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Reads like a good contender to me..Way to go. Very descriptive work that you have penned in this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 4:04:00 PM
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Thanks much and for your visits too, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2022 12:24:00 PM
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Perfect phrase there, Kim: 'Water Strider' really describes 'fishinsect.' Great picture-poem combo! Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 2:59:00 PM
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Thank you, Gershon!
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Valsa George
Date: 6/23/2022 8:50:00 AM
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Beautiful image and a beautiful haiku ! All the best, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 8:51:00 AM
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Thank you, my friend!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/23/2022 7:50:00 AM
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Hope it doesn't sting. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 8:10:00 AM
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Saw this yesterday, down at the creek with my grandsons!
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