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the water strider skims the creek - constant coaxing concentric circles
6/23/2022 Summer Nature Themed Haiku Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Used HMS 5/7/5

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Date: 7/8/2022 3:11:00 AM
Back with congrats. Way to go. I like this insect's abilities. Sara
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Date: 7/5/2022 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and this beautiful haiku my dear friend Kim! Thanks a lot for sharing. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2022 10:04:00 AM
Thank you most kindly, my friend!
Date: 7/4/2022 4:53:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Kim. I can really picture this even without the picture!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 5:55:00 PM
Thanks! This pic was from pixabay…what I saw was cooler :)
Date: 7/4/2022 7:57:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Tania! Something I saw that day. I had to look up and see what they were.
Date: 7/4/2022 5:30:00 AM
Oh so many of the little guys around my area. I could spend hours watching them. Nice alliteration! Congratulations Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 5:43:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! :)
Date: 7/4/2022 4:55:00 AM
"concentric circles" - Great work of the small creature. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 5:43:00 AM
A joy to watch! Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 6/29/2022 6:50:00 AM
lovely ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2022 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much! How fun it was to catch this sighting with my grandsons! I had to look up what they were.
Date: 6/28/2022 5:05:00 AM
Another great one Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2022 12:02:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 6/23/2022 3:09:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me..Way to go. Very descriptive work that you have penned in this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 4:04:00 PM
Thanks much and for your visits too, my friend!
Date: 6/23/2022 12:24:00 PM
Perfect phrase there, Kim: 'Water Strider' really describes 'fishinsect.' Great picture-poem combo! Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/23/2022 8:50:00 AM
Beautiful image and a beautiful haiku ! All the best, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/23/2022 7:50:00 AM
Hope it doesn't sting. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 8:10:00 AM
Saw this yesterday, down at the creek with my grandsons!

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