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Strider

the water strider
skims the creek - constant coaxing 
concentric circles


6/23/2022
Summer Nature Themed Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Used HMS 5/7/5

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2022

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July 8, 2022 at 3:11 AM

Back with congrats. Way to go. I like this insect's abilities. Sara

July 5, 2022 at 7:22 AM

Congratulations on your win and this beautiful haiku my dear friend Kim! Thanks a lot for sharing. Hugs

July 5, 2022 at 10:04 AM

Thank you most kindly, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2022 at 4:53 PM

Congrats on the win, Kim. I can really picture this even without the picture!

July 4, 2022 at 5:55 PM

Thanks! This pic was from pixabay…what I saw was cooler :)

July 4, 2022 at 7:57 AM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

July 4, 2022 at 8:41 AM

Thank you, Tania! Something I saw that day. I had to look up and see what they were.

Linda Alice Fowler

July 4, 2022 at 5:30 AM

Oh so many of the little guys around my area. I could spend hours watching them. Nice alliteration! Congratulations Kim!

July 4, 2022 at 5:43 AM

Thank you, Linda! :)

Christuraj Alex

July 4, 2022 at 4:55 AM

"concentric circles" - Great work of the small creature. Congratulations!

July 4, 2022 at 5:43 AM

A joy to watch! Thank you, Christuraj!

June 29, 2022 at 6:50 AM

lovely ~

June 29, 2022 at 6:56 AM

Thank you so much! How fun it was to catch this sighting with my grandsons! I had to look up what they were.

Linda Alice Fowler

June 28, 2022 at 5:05 AM

Another great one Kim.

June 28, 2022 at 12:02 PM

Thank you, Linda!

June 23, 2022 at 3:09 PM

Reads like a good contender to me..Way to go. Very descriptive work that you have penned in this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

June 23, 2022 at 4:04 PM

Thanks much and for your visits too, my friend!

June 23, 2022 at 12:24 PM

Perfect phrase there, Kim: 'Water Strider' really describes 'fishinsect.' Great picture-poem combo! Thanks, Gershon

June 23, 2022 at 2:59 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

June 23, 2022 at 8:50 AM

Beautiful image and a beautiful haiku ! All the best, Kim!

June 23, 2022 at 8:51 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Victor Buhagiar

June 23, 2022 at 7:50 AM

Hope it doesn't sting. Hugs.

June 23, 2022 at 8:10 AM

Saw this yesterday, down at the creek with my grandsons!

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