Stress On Toll Road Express

Maverick(Vers libre)

Life for me was vain, trying to get gain
In Peterbilt truck, I’ve had the worst luck

Driving in deep snow, bad tempers do show
Praying the roads clear, very hard to steer

Having a tire low,  over heats will  blows
Many trips are lame, and bosses the same

A trucker’s great fame, stress his middle name
While grinding those gears, on roads never clear

Stresses with no rest, on gear jam express
Old Smoky bear nabs, on the super slabs

Eighteen wheels rolling, not night of bowling 
Super slabs tolling, companies folding

Idea of toll roads, trucks carry whole load
No other reason, government’s treason

You want-a see stress, special men/women pass test
It’s concrete jungle, no room for bungle 

Life isn’t breezy,  for Joe made easy
His loads are made late, from stops at toll gate

`Tis vicious cycle, bless angel Michael
I drove in my sleep, loads on time to keep!!!!

"Dedicated to Joe Dietrich, also a Truck Driver"

For and in Honor of Carolyn Devonshire
And Contest: March Madness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 8:05 PM
Hey so you won with this one!! Congratulations and I am going to fave it and print it out right now before I forget this time!
Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Many congratulation's John on your win in Carloyn's "March Madness" contest....:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:48 PM
ps. He refuses to read poetry, but I will print this out and try to get him to read it!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:47 PM
wow, john, I am so impressed by this poem you wrote with my hubbie in mind. How sweet of you! Right now he is not working at all. He got a chance to train for an oil tanker job and I was SO excited but it all fell thru when his trainer had no patience to answer his questions and gave him bad marks. So again he is searching for work. Praying he finds something soon. Congrats on your fine win. I much appreciate this. Luv, andrea
Neels Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Hey there John, congratulations on your awesome win in Carolyn's contest :) Wilma
Haick Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Hey John, Congratulations on your very well deserving 2nd Place win in Carolyn's contest! Love, Annalise
Mannan Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:18 AM
Heartiest congrats for this victory Moses.
Johnson Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Congratulations on your no. 2 with this great poem on the stress of being a big truck driver. Not everyone could do it that's for sure. Great work. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, John. Nice going. Thanks for reading mine. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carolyn, John
Brown Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's "March Madness" contest John. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your win..Very well written couples..Good seeing the trucker through the trucker's eyes...I feel that you would have been a trucker who cared where I have heard from some truckers that they didn't care about the other people on the road..Thanks for the honor of second place in your contest..I know that it is not easy to choose from the many great works that are written..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:15 AM
I could really feel the power of stress in the mind of a truck driver. While driving, our thoughts turn to many things -- not only the hazzards on the road but things like government intrusion in our lives. (But please don't fall asleep behind the wheel -- your safety is more important than making a deadline.) Great work, John. Congratulations on your second-place win! Love, Carolyn
Rams Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:19 PM
military trucks driving in snow made it so hard to go.driving on the jersey pike especially in the dark of night.
Horne Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Great write, John, and thanks for your kind words : ) Jack
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 3:01 PM
oh, how kinetic this is , john... enjoyed the sense of vitality and packed lines! good wonning luck to you! :) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:35 PM
Engaging narrative on the stress on Toll Road Rxpress, John
Devonshire Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 9:19 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, John. Now it's starting to fill. Love, Carolyn
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