Strength In Storms

waves crash mist and spray touch upon lighthouse's strong walls.. lights steadily warn lightkeeper's sturdy rock home filled with light warmth love.. unharmed as storm passes delphiniums bloom their gauze blossoms withstand storm.. strength in featherweight
Sponsor: Gail Doyle Contest: A Scenery Of Your Choice As An Artist July 15, 2012
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O'Leary Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 4:46 PM
Beautiful... Congratulations on your win... Terry
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 1:41 PM
What lovely imagery, Sara, a peaceful scene after the storm! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Hey, I see you are high on the list. Congratulations.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 12:26 PM
congrats Sara on a grand first place win for this awesome scene painted in eloquent words luv.. thankxx for your help also..
Gorelick Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Worthy of a 1st..congrats..you painted a lovely picture..the last one is so original. BG
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 6:27 PM
Beautiful, Sara! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Burch Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Brilliant, Sara!! love it...Big Congrats on your win!!! I like the "strength in featherweight"...wonderful juxtaposition...love ya, deb
Williams Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Sara, congrats on your win, beauty in the crshing waves..David
Johnson Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 9:56 AM
Well thought out and well done. Congratulations Sara. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Sara. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 9:09 PM
Sara. I forgot to ask. did you use that Robert Kindaide picture for your inspiration? I think I see it in this nice little poem of yours. I almost used that picture too!!
Anish Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Nice haiku! I liked the first one the most. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:59 PM
you painted a great scene. Love how you put flowers there by it.
Horne Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:45 PM
awesome piece, my friend - I just love lighthouses
Susan Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:44 AM
pretty images - best wishes in the contest :)
A   Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:28 AM
Hello Sara, stopping by to say hi... good luck with your wonderful haikus.... always~pd
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 3:15 AM
This is a most lovely entry for Gail's contest Sara. I am sure it will fair well. I adore haiku, and you display your talent with your excellent imagery in these.
Croft Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 5:53 PM
good luck in the contest. thanks for your comments and yes i have many regrets in my life, but i wouldn't have what i have if i didn't pay the price at one time or another
Sivey Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 4:01 PM
This is truly a gorgeous write! I just love lighthouses as they are one of my favorite landmarks! And watching a lighthouse operating during a storm is surly an amazing sight! I love this poem a lot Sara, you've done an excellent job! Great Work!!
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