Strength

Strength, Something I needed. I did resist. God held me, showed me What I would have to do. It is time to get out now. Screaming in pain, I have no might. I keep trying and trying until... I’m standing there aware of your insight. ©Holly P. Moore November 2012

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Chrissy Pierce-Guzman

Date: 12/5/2012 9:56:00 AM

I really liked this I felt the struggle within to find strength Very powerful write thanks for sharing! Keep up the great work:)

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/26/2012 12:53:00 PM

Wow...This is really deep Holly.I had to read it over and over.Keep your strength. :o)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/25/2012 5:21:00 PM

So true my dear poet friend. Profound piece with emotions that scream. Well written poetry. Hugs Michael

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2012 7:12:00 AM

Try to enjoy small things in everyday life. . . well written. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 11/24/2012 6:00:00 AM

Holly now this is just great, it has emotion that just jumps off the page and hits you right in the face, well done...David