Streetlight

The Christmas lights can’t shine bright enough
To overcome her pain and the screams inside
Loneliness merging with past replaying ongoing
And the images will not go away with any storm
She tries to stay in the moment, but she still cries
Pleading for answers, kept from her far too long
She’d like to run away in the soft snow instead
And leave not a single footprint behind to see
Maybe then the memories will not catch up to her
No avalanches to keep on falling and surviving
The past has a way of doing this, with strong surges
While it merges with present for things long overdue
She’s tired of waiting under the streetlights at night
Where the snow falls around her, but she is not seen

12/10/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/18/2017 10:51:00 AM
A very heartfelt poem, Heidi. The plea for acknowledgement of you as a person, an individual, of your existence is very powerful. I love this poem, as I go backtracking through your poem archive. This is a strong, defiant poem. A 7 all day long. I see you under the streetlight, dear. Love and kisses.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/18/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Freddie. You always seem to show up on days when your comments make a difference in my day. I appreciate your viewing and feedback . Hope all is well. God Bless you.
Date: 12/12/2016 10:05:00 AM
Oh Heidi such a sad yet beautiful poem. Not only is there a longing for relief but also a quiet hopefulness. As always very well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and feedback :)
Date: 12/11/2016 3:11:00 PM
So sad, very well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you John! :)
Date: 12/11/2016 6:54:00 AM
This is so sad...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2016 7:01:00 AM
Yes Mike. Thanks for your visit. :)
Date: 12/11/2016 6:10:00 AM
Yes, the snow falls in the appalling silence ... and your beautiful poem for those snowy islands ... very well written ...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2016 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Probir :)
Date: 12/10/2016 8:54:00 PM
Achingly painful Heidi, last line feels so empty, its a killer. The holidays are some of the loneliest times for many people, well spoken. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Paloma :)
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