Streetlamp

(Streetlamp) street at night shadows dance to flickering lamp ------------------------------- Contest: Illumination Sponsor: Steven Henderson

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/4/2015 2:49:00 PM

Hi Paul: Very innovative words. Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:19:00 AM

Thank you Ralph; enjoyed your winning entry, too. // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2015 10:44:00 AM

Excellent dancing shadows..Congrats.Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:28:00 AM

I'm so pleased that you found this short poem to your liking, Sara. Thank you. All the best. // paul

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:38:00 PM

PAUL, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~

David Mohn

Date: 5/3/2015 7:28:00 PM

Love the image you create with this Paul...congrats!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:22:00 AM

Thank you David; enjoyed your unique take. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2015 5:52:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:18:00 AM

Thank you Jan. I'm pleased with the result. Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2015 3:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:30:00 AM

Many thanks, Joseph! All the best. // paul

Sneha Rv

Date: 4/11/2015 1:53:00 AM

Wonderful!!! All the best for the contest!! :D Sneha

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2015 5:30:00 PM

Thank you Sneha! I watched your video; short, but enjoyable. I do much appreciate the thought:) All the best. // paul

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/11/2015 4:54:00 AM

Same to you! :) P.S - Could you please see my latest post? It has a surprise! (Posted yesterday)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2015 4:08:00 AM

Thank you Sneha! Lovely to see you around:) Glad you enjoyed this lanterne. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/5/2015 6:15:00 PM

This has lit up my page.good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/6/2015 8:04:00 AM

Thank you Richard! Your comment shines! // paul

James Fraser

Date: 4/5/2015 2:14:00 PM

It's not just the shadows that have come alive, you've made the Streetlamp also Paul. If for the contest, I think you may have a winner here // James...

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 3:19:00 PM

Thank you James; I like your winning comments! All the best. // paul

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/5/2015 12:50:00 PM

This is a very nice rhythmic piece of poetry with words of fun speaking in gentle whispers. Emile.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Emile; your comments are always a poem in themselves! // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/5/2015 3:26:00 AM

This makes me want to dance with the shadows under the street light. Fun :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Casarah! I can imagine you dancing in the mysterious shadows! Happy Easter to you and all your loved ones! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/5/2015 2:00:00 AM

the magical way you did with the simple streetlamp.. :D!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 7:06:00 AM

Good day to you Olive_eloi! Hope you are enjoying Easter! Now you can start on all the treats that have been awaiting to be tucked into:) Hugs // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/4/2015 10:18:00 PM

Perfect set up, unexpected "street-lamp"..great job. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Barbara; your visit and comments are appreciated. A Happy Easter to you! // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/4/2015 8:55:00 PM

So nice to read your poetry this evening. Have a Happy Easter! Light & Love

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 6:47:00 AM

Thank you for reading, Debbie! May you and yours enjoy a very happy Easter! All the best. // paul

Michael Dom

Date: 4/4/2015 8:22:00 PM

I like this image Paul, and the form is an interesting which one I've not tried. Hope Easter is all good for you. Cheers!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Michael! May you too have a lovely and happy Easter! All the best. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/4/2015 6:26:00 PM

you shine with this radiant work, paul... street / lamp as first and last lines-- creative!.. huggs and happy easter

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 5:54:00 AM

You are very kind Nette! Of course, I love your 'illuminating' comments and the welcome visit:) A Blessed and Happy Easter to you too! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2015 6:01:00 PM

beautiful imagery in so few words - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Lanternes are cute little writes, yet they are very demanding...they want a lot said with so few words:) Have a lovely day. Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/4/2015 5:43:00 PM

I read of this contest, dear....came up with nothing. I'm glad you took the challenge :) Lovely...Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 5:47:00 AM

Lovely to have you visiting on Easter morning, Eileen! Thank you for stopping by; glad you enjoyed this little offering. May this special day be a blessed and happy one to you and all your loved ones :) hugs // paul