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(Streetlamp) street at night shadows dance to flickering lamp ------------------------------- Contest: Illumination Sponsor: Steven Henderson

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Date: 5/4/2015 2:49:00 PM
Hi Paul: Very innovative words. Congrats on your win.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Ralph; enjoyed your winning entry, too. // paul
Date: 5/4/2015 10:44:00 AM
Excellent dancing shadows..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 5/6/2015 10:28:00 AM
I'm so pleased that you found this short poem to your liking, Sara. Thank you. All the best. // paul
Date: 5/3/2015 9:38:00 PM
PAUL, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/3/2015 7:28:00 PM
Love the image you create with this Paul...congrats!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:22:00 AM
Thank you David; enjoyed your unique take. // paul
Date: 5/3/2015 5:52:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Jan. I'm pleased with the result. Hugs // paul
Date: 5/3/2015 3:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win Paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2015 10:30:00 AM
Many thanks, Joseph! All the best. // paul
Date: 4/11/2015 1:53:00 AM
Wonderful!!! All the best for the contest!! :D Sneha
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2015 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Sneha! I watched your video; short, but enjoyable. I do much appreciate the thought:) All the best. // paul
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Date: 4/11/2015 4:54:00 AM
Same to you! :) P.S - Could you please see my latest post? It has a surprise! (Posted yesterday)
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2015 4:08:00 AM
Thank you Sneha! Lovely to see you around:) Glad you enjoyed this lanterne. Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Date: 4/5/2015 6:15:00 PM
This has lit up my page.good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/6/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Richard! Your comment shines! // paul
Date: 4/5/2015 2:14:00 PM
It's not just the shadows that have come alive, you've made the Streetlamp also Paul. If for the contest, I think you may have a winner here // James...
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thank you James; I like your winning comments! All the best. // paul
Date: 4/5/2015 12:50:00 PM
This is a very nice rhythmic piece of poetry with words of fun speaking in gentle whispers. Emile.
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Emile; your comments are always a poem in themselves! // paul
Date: 4/5/2015 3:26:00 AM
This makes me want to dance with the shadows under the street light. Fun :)
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Date: 4/5/2015 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Casarah! I can imagine you dancing in the mysterious shadows! Happy Easter to you and all your loved ones! hugs // paul
Date: 4/5/2015 2:00:00 AM
the magical way you did with the simple streetlamp.. :D!
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Date: 4/5/2015 7:06:00 AM
Good day to you Olive_eloi! Hope you are enjoying Easter! Now you can start on all the treats that have been awaiting to be tucked into:) Hugs // paul
Date: 4/4/2015 10:18:00 PM
Perfect set up, unexpected "street-lamp"..great job. BG
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Barbara; your visit and comments are appreciated. A Happy Easter to you! // paul
Date: 4/4/2015 8:55:00 PM
So nice to read your poetry this evening. Have a Happy Easter! Light & Love
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 6:47:00 AM
Thank you for reading, Debbie! May you and yours enjoy a very happy Easter! All the best. // paul
Date: 4/4/2015 8:22:00 PM
I like this image Paul, and the form is an interesting which one I've not tried. Hope Easter is all good for you. Cheers!
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Date: 4/5/2015 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Michael! May you too have a lovely and happy Easter! All the best. // paul
Date: 4/4/2015 6:26:00 PM
you shine with this radiant work, paul... street / lamp as first and last lines-- creative!.. huggs and happy easter
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 5:54:00 AM
You are very kind Nette! Of course, I love your 'illuminating' comments and the welcome visit:) A Blessed and Happy Easter to you too! Hugs // paul
Date: 4/4/2015 6:01:00 PM
beautiful imagery in so few words - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Jan. Lanternes are cute little writes, yet they are very demanding...they want a lot said with so few words:) Have a lovely day. Hugs // paul
Date: 4/4/2015 5:43:00 PM
I read of this contest, dear....came up with nothing. I'm glad you took the challenge :) Lovely...Hugs
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Date: 4/5/2015 5:47:00 AM
Lovely to have you visiting on Easter morning, Eileen! Thank you for stopping by; glad you enjoyed this little offering. May this special day be a blessed and happy one to you and all your loved ones :) hugs // paul