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Streambed

Green moss over stone Tumbling in shy sunlight Following the ghost For "Solace in Nature" contest

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James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2009 3:47:00 PM

Excellent Haiku Katie>> all the best in Raul's contest>>James

Sara Lokken

Date: 9/4/2009 7:38:00 AM

I'm feeding off your inspiration now. I've been hungry for weeks....starving.....I'm a tough critic, but I am so loving all your work. Just breathtaking. Love, Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/4/2009 7:33:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest with this excellent Haiku Katie. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/3/2009 3:26:00 PM

A very unique twist on the contest !! Great job!! ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2009 3:04:00 PM

God speed in the contest. Very descriptive. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/3/2009 2:54:00 PM

nicely done, I had a similar idea.

Date: 9/3/2009 2:52:00 PM

What a creative view! Nice use of personification. Much to think about here. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen