Stream of Consciousness

I found that I was lost the other day
and didn't mind at all, you see, for I
was climbing off old memories and took
a backward look to keep a steady path           
and then take stock, when suddenly
I disappeared, and didn't notice it
for half an hour or so.                     

Something like those quantum particles
jumped orbit on me, got there without
traveling the intervening space; 
now no more questions, please, for answers too,
are missing.  I can tell you how to get there,
but I cannot tell you where 
or what to watch for.

Nor do I find exclusiveness--in fact
no ponderous duality at all..
Dismay is not in sight,
nor  judgement, nor a shred of pride--
no trace of that pretentious "I"
along the living water's edge.

If there are words,
they enter when I pull away.
If muses play upon my consciousness,
it is for naught,  and I am but the slate
to hold some history of the divine
.
Open the shutters,  entertain the light.
And when it passes, still there is no end; 
for this poor crumbling body too is void
of everything but joy.
                   ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/15/2012 4:26:00 PM
a very interesting poem, which needs a few reads to really sink one's teeth into. i especially like the first verse...
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Robert Ludden
Date: 10/15/2012 5:07:00 PM
Yes, up to my old tricks, I guess.
Date: 10/15/2012 8:38:00 AM
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Date: 10/15/2012 8:27:00 AM
ponderous duality-hx of the divine-pretentios "I" good stuff
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