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Strayed Sheep

They wander, free range sheep, Following a breeze, a wafting scent Clover…perhaps More likely the innate call To roam In search of themselves. Freedom, a dubious destination As jagged cliffs O’erlook the crushing surf Escape An unknown dream For wind and tide And nature Call them Home.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/20/2024 7:49:00 PM

"nature Call them Home" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/20/2024 2:20:00 PM

There's something quite wonderful inside your poems John - with apparent ease you have portrayed so much, whilst the words float soft as the breeze itself. I'm carried away into the world where many poets tread despite the obvious hazards. Excellent as always

Jaymee Thomas

Date: 12/20/2024 9:59:00 AM

I really like the brevity and urgency of this piece, John. Even with fewer than 50 words, you manage to keep it well-grounded in the image while embedding a little philosophy. Really nice work.

John Lawless
Date: 12/20/2024 12:06:00 PM

thank you Jaymee,

Michael Tor

Date: 12/19/2024 11:21:00 PM

Beautifully written John, wonderful imagery and peaceful setting I can see them all grazing...

Tom Woody

Date: 12/15/2024 5:47:00 AM

Ahhh but freedom comes with a price. There be wolves out thar

John Lawless
Date: 12/16/2024 12:03:00 PM

and to many have paid it Tom...but none of them were sheep.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2024 5:30:00 AM

- Where I live there are many free-ranging sheep everywhere... a natural feature in a beautiful landscape - A great poem for this contest, John :) - (I chose a different twist:))) - Good luck - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

John Lawless
Date: 12/16/2024 12:02:00 PM

thanks for stopping by Anne-Lise always nice to hear from you. From your description I think I'd like to put on the proverbial "sheep's clothing" and hang out with them for awhile.