Strawberry Moon In June

In solitude and serenity, hand in hand, they eye the field. Sublime fruit, red, plump, desirable - like the steadfast supermoon that’s bright overhead on this starry night. Her lover plucks a strawberry, takes a bite, kisses her lips, drops a knee, hires the moon to elucidate brilliant diamonds. 6/5/2022 The Moon in June (Choose One of Five Forms) Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Free Verse
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Strawberries to eat or a Full June Moon both are great. Today, be blessed with your wonderful win...........
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Kauffman Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 9:21 AM
What a delicious and totally delightful picture Kim. Your words bring up so many visceral moments. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Thank you so much, Sam!
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 11:37 PM
i really love your free verse and the luscious imagery created here, Kim. Big Congrats in my contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Glad you liked it!
George Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Lovely super moon on a starry night, red like a strawberry ! A picturesque image
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
May Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 2:10 AM
I love how you framed the last 2 lines Kim, Wonderful write..
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Baker Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Somebody did it right! Bam! the wedding 's on! Thanks for the exciting experience of what can happen under the moon in June. Great entry, Kim. Good luck! Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Smiling…thanks, Bill!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 2:51 AM
A loveable poem that makes me yearn for days gone by.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 4:59 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
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