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Strawberry Moon In June

In solitude and serenity, hand in hand, they eye the field. Sublime fruit, red, plump, desirable - like the steadfast supermoon that’s bright overhead on this starry night. Her lover plucks a strawberry, takes a bite, kisses her lips, drops a knee, hires the moon to elucidate brilliant diamonds. 6/5/2022 The Moon in June (Choose One of Five Forms) Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Free Verse

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Date: 6/14/2022 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Strawberries to eat or a Full June Moon both are great. Today, be blessed with your wonderful win...........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2022 1:41:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 6/13/2022 9:21:00 AM
What a delicious and totally delightful picture Kim. Your words bring up so many visceral moments. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2022 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam!
Date: 6/12/2022 11:37:00 PM
i really love your free verse and the luscious imagery created here, Kim. Big Congrats in my contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2022 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Glad you liked it!
Date: 6/9/2022 8:32:00 PM
Lovely super moon on a starry night, red like a strawberry ! A picturesque image
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2022 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 6/8/2022 2:10:00 AM
I love how you framed the last 2 lines Kim, Wonderful write..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 6/7/2022 3:46:00 PM
Somebody did it right! Bam! the wedding 's on! Thanks for the exciting experience of what can happen under the moon in June. Great entry, Kim. Good luck! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2022 4:20:00 PM
Smiling…thanks, Bill!
Date: 6/6/2022 2:51:00 AM
A loveable poem that makes me yearn for days gone by.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2022 4:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!

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