Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Shape

- Strawberries -

                                          s                 s
                                           u              t
                                           n               r
                                           r              a
                                             i             w
                                             p           b
                                               e           e
                                             ne         rri
                                                d      es
                                  the taste is    sweet and fresh.
                              in my garden where many different
                             fruits grow. a delight for the eyes and 
                             mouth. to touch and smell. the tongue
                               separates rivers with cream on top.
                                  always let reason hold the reins.
                                     erotic flow of sweet wishes
                                      love that dazzles sweetly
                                       not a disparaging word 
                                          about strawberries                                
                                            one is too little 
                                             a large bowl
                                                 is too
                                                 much
                                   


24.04.2023
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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2nd place in the contest
Brian Strand contest no 1211

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Susan Ashley April 27, 2023 at 9:17 AM Dear Anne-Lise, a beautiful rendition in delectable poetic verse. Such a lovely shape poem! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brain's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2023 at 12:25 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs

JC Brul April 26, 2023 at 7:35 PM This is so cute Anne Lise. I love it. A fav for me. Congratulations. Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2023 at 12:25 PM - JCB, many thanks for visiting, fave and congratulations :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds April 26, 2023 at 7:06 PM A lovely Shape poem Anne-Lise, words so true strawberries are delicious and for me only a large bowl will do… Hugs, Belle:) Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2023 at 12:24 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Belle :) - hugs

Alexis Y. April 26, 2023 at 6:01 AM WoW! Anne-Lise, You did a great job. I love strawberries. And your well-written poem reminds me of why a I enjoy them so. Congratulations on your trophy win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 6:03 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations ... have a wonderful day you too, Alexis :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar April 26, 2023 at 2:37 AM Do your strawberries grow in a greenhouse? Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 5:26 AM - No, I don't have a greenhouse Victor ... but I would like one :) - hugs

Valsa George April 25, 2023 at 7:13 PM Yummy strawberry, sweet and tart! Enjoyed the poem and its shape. Congratulations Smile, on your well deserved podium win. Hugs and blessings Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 5:29 AM - Valsa, many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs

Sotto Poet April 25, 2023 at 6:36 PM Back with heartfelt congrats on your podium win that it's with no surprise to me. Blessings dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 5:28 AM - Many thanks, my friend for congratulations :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer April 25, 2023 at 5:15 PM This is delightful and delicious, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 5:28 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Ilene :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose April 25, 2023 at 3:42 PM Congrats Sunshine, most beautiful strawberry, creative and juicy ! Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 5:27 AM - Vie Rose, many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman April 25, 2023 at 2:55 PM Congratulations !!! so succulent and sensuous Enjoyed it. Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 5:27 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Nancy :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman April 25, 2023 at 11:52 AM Absolutely delicious, delectable and delightful Anne-Lise! It sounds like much anticipated spring is coming to your garden with warmer days but colder nights. What a happy time for you! Congratulations on your win with this lovely shape poem! Hugs and spring blessings! Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 12:04 PM - We have 6+ degrees and freezing wind, Sam ... doesn't look like spring at all :) - Strawberries, carrots and potatoes have been planted ... but several months to harvest :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2023 at 10:02 AM Love this! The beginning - sunripened strawberries gives our taste buds a reason to keep on reading <3 Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:24 AM - A poem with taste makes the mouth happy :) - Many thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2023 at 9:03 AM WOW!!! What a creative write/shape. I love it and I love strawberries. Have a great/blessed day.................. Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:22 AM - Glad you liked it, Paula :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Brian Sambourne April 25, 2023 at 8:03 AM Wonderful in design + content. Strawberries in cream boost taste buds to new heights. Best wishes, Brian Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:21 AM - Strawberries can be used for many things, Brian :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Anisha Dutta April 25, 2023 at 7:54 AM Mellow juicy strawberry satisfying taste buds. Big Congrats to win TOP Love. Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:20 AM - Many thanks for reading and congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs

Yann Rolland April 25, 2023 at 7:15 AM delicious poem, to see, to read, and be eaten some time, exquisite imagination for the reader, you made a wonderful penning Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:19 AM - I enjoy every single berry Yann, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel April 25, 2023 at 3:51 AM Wow! Sounds and looks enticing, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:17 AM - Thank you, Jo :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis April 25, 2023 at 3:21 AM Yummy, dearest Anne-Lise. Deliciously written! Blessings Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:17 AM - Strawberries are heavenly ... especially in summer ... fresh and delicious ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit April 24, 2023 at 4:53 PM Lovely design--splendid descriptions, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 1:26 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment on my strawberry, Vijay :) - hugs

David Mchattie April 24, 2023 at 4:42 PM I would kill for a garden strawberry. Our strawberries come from Mexico and have no flavor... but we still buy them. Have a great day my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 1:26 AM - Norwegian strawberries are not ripe yet ... we have to buy from other countries ... but, I have strawberry plants in my garden ... in 2-3 months you can come to eat sun-ripened strawberries, David ... juicy, with a lot taste :) - hugs

Sotto Poet April 24, 2023 at 4:06 PM Anne-Lise, You have written a beautiful poem with this piece. Both the thought and the strawberries are quite endearing. It could be a good fit for Brian's contests Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 1:22 AM - It was written for that contest, Las .... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes April 24, 2023 at 3:43 PM Aww you are so clever. This is priceless Anne-Lise. The poem is adorable and so is the strawberry.. How long did it take you to get that right ???? Loved it hugs and favorite

Sara Kendrick April 24, 2023 at 1:24 PM I enjoyed seeing and reading your shape poem. Delightful. Way to go. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:43 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment on my strawberry, Sara :) - hugs

Daniel Turner April 24, 2023 at 12:58 PM Delicious write, Anne. I love strawberries too! Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:06 PM - Fresh and delicious, Daniel ... with vanilla cream, today (but, not from my garden ... it's far too early :) - Thank you :) - hugs