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Strangest Thought...

A strangest thought I feel A deepest darkness of a mind The corners turned from pain Sanity of humanity I survied I thought they would come for me Locking away from praying eyes Each knock of the door I crawled away They could not get in Time would tick and the madness would appear Nothing was clear the light was full of fear Not a single tear but a crowded tear drops They fell in such despair The walls were stone like the heart that ruled I see a thought the strangest thought I see rose blooms I see the light with sunshine covering me I hear the laughter from within yes I hear the laughter A truth from each corner of my mind I now find a smile in those thoughts of mine A strangest thought I feel

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Date: 8/2/2010 6:34:00 AM
You taken thoughts that little step farther with this interesting piece Sarah, nice one >> James
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Date: 7/31/2010 4:20:00 AM
Good resolution to the thoughts that were once negative...Enjoyed the reading of your work...Sara
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Date: 7/30/2010 7:14:00 PM
powerful! Sarah! and thanks for your comments, jimbo
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:49:00 AM
A wonderful write. The mind can take us to the most beautiful places -sometimes-! Take good care and keep that pen flowing. Always, Farah
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Date: 7/29/2010 5:23:00 PM
I enjoyed your thoughts well penned, sarah
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