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Stranded

seven seas of ink
                          words by craft ferry the soul
                                to deaf islands break

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/18/2017 3:05:00 PM

Really liked this, thought provoking!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/18/2017 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Arthur :) xomo!

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/18/2017 12:53:00 PM

Love how you penned this Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/18/2017 12:57:00 PM

Thank you! It's a great brief form, helps me rein in metaphor, I could go on and on... :)

Roy Pett

Date: 12/11/2017 12:00:00 PM

Absolutely brilliant Maureen. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/12/2017 6:33:00 AM

Gush, thank you Roy :) xomo!

Mike Hauser

Date: 12/9/2017 1:26:00 PM

Love it

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thank you :) cheers!

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/9/2017 8:07:00 AM

Nicely crafted senryu Maureen...god bless and happy holidays my friend...^WW^

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2017 10:19:00 AM

Thank you :) and you my friend! xomo <3

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/9/2017 8:03:00 AM

who really broke ... your thoughts are massive ... love your title ...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2017 10:18:00 AM

Nice :) thank you! xomo!

Joseph May

Date: 12/9/2017 6:36:00 AM

Nicely penned Maureen

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2017 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2017 7:02:00 PM

A really cool one, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2017 10:18:00 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2017 6:07:00 PM

ha, I just saw your "ferried away" comment. So cute, Maureen

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2017 10:17:00 PM

;)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2017 3:58:00 PM

Wonderful write, Maureen.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2017 10:16:00 PM

Thank you Eve :) xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2017 2:12:00 PM

- Excellent, Maureen :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thank you! Ditto Sunshine :) xomo!

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/7/2017 2:57:00 PM

Maureen, you're an amazing poet. This is great poetry... hugs and smiles :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Akkina! xomo :)

Silent One

Date: 12/7/2017 5:13:00 AM

Deep....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/7/2017 8:02:00 AM

...as the sea ;)

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 12/6/2017 5:50:00 PM

Love Your Few Words Of Huge Emotions...Your A Great Poet!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 9:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Vickie :) takes one to know one dear poetess! <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2017 3:33:00 PM

So very interesting this is. I love this metaphor for words, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 9:29:00 PM

A good metaphor is irresistible isn't it? I tend to get ferried away ;)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/6/2017 3:11:00 PM

Stranded! I feel that way sometimes when i have nothing to write. Nice poem my friend. Have a nice evening my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 9:27:00 PM

Thank you Darlene :) xomo!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/6/2017 9:53:00 AM

Oceans of spilt ink should reach many attentive ears, Maureen! Fortunately I am one of them:) Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 10:15:00 AM

Thank you Paul :) Bless! xomo

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/6/2017 9:04:00 AM

Wow so poetic the of words. Senryu eh, would luv to try it but they seem hard. Thumbs up. Soo nice to read from u again, hope u will my latest too.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 10:14:00 AM

The form is new to me, but suits my brief style; try it! Thank you :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/6/2017 6:57:00 AM

Potent words..intriguing poem!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 8:32:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :) xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/6/2017 6:25:00 AM

And the waves roll on and off unnoticed... intriguing ... All the best Maureen

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 8:31:00 AM

Thank you Arturo :) a lovely day to you! xomo

James Swartz

Date: 12/5/2017 10:25:00 PM

Seas of ink you use to write all your wonderful words. Great poem Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much James :) xomo!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/5/2017 8:41:00 PM

Wonderful profound senryu Mo!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Cheryl :) xomo!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2017 7:19:00 PM

your words aren't falling on deaf ears here Mo:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 8:23:00 AM

You're so sweet Jan :) thank you! xomo

Lewis Raynes

Date: 12/5/2017 5:13:00 PM

Such a pointed write Maureen, i'm not a deaf island though :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/6/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Lewis :) xomo

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