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Poetic Form: Than Bauk

Inspired: 2023 November 03

*1st Place*
Something Bauk-tiful
Contest Judged: 2023 November 17
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

Image: News of A Puppy For Christmas by Giphy

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Love expresses ~on faces by~ traces of smiles.

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Terry Miller

Date: 11/20/2023 3:46:00 AM

Congratulations!

Karen Croft

Date: 11/17/2023 11:19:00 PM

Congratulations!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/17/2023 11:35:00 PM

Your light shines, Karen. Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 9:04:00 PM

Nice! Congratulations, William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/17/2023 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, Kim, for your continued support. Aloha, William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/17/2023 10:03:00 AM

Aloha William! Wonderfully written, hoaaloha! So true! Your lines are full of love's delight! I am slowly catching up and digging out! Thank you for your understanding and wonderful support! Sending you congratulations on wings of smiles! Happy Thanksgiving!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/17/2023 11:01:00 AM

I’m going to need a tamer turkey for me’tums, but, you can add an extra dollop of whipped cream on that pumpkin pie, Sam. Happy gobbling-day from the Kalua piggy State, Aloha, William

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:05:00 AM

Wonderful, William. A bauktiful write! Congratulations on your win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/17/2023 7:49:00 AM

Aloha, Charles. Cheers and more so, Than-kful for its, sponsor. Mahalo, William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2023 1:21:00 PM

I have written some of these a long time ago. I enjoyed reading yours which seems so seamless and the nice accompanying video. I know from writing them they are not easy. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/10/2023 6:56:00 PM

Mahalo, Sara, and to you as well. I use the sonance of the words, whether they'd be a consonant or vowel sound, and where in (syllabically) does the sound resonates. Again, thank you in-kind, my friend. Aloha, William

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/6/2023 4:55:00 AM

William, The finesse with which you have approached this piece truly showcases your artistic abilities. The captivating moments captured on faces, portrayed through subtle traces of smiles, perfectly align with the underlying theme. Your execution of this expression of love is commendable.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/6/2023 5:13:00 AM

Oh, Lasaad, you are the epitome of a true friend! Your idyllic considerations are so encouraging and an absolute delight to read. I extend my sincerest courtesies and thank you for your visit! Aloha, William

Ink Empress

Date: 11/4/2023 8:07:00 AM

This is so cute and sweet i love your rhymes too and the way you’ve written for beautiful moments is so fitting for the theme! Very well delivered!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/6/2023 5:07:00 AM

Your encouraging words are truly uplifting, Ink Empress! I'm grateful for your kindness and visit, my friend! Aloha, William