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If I could write a story And get lost in it forever Wouldn’t that be the day The day my worries would go away Oh we humans are so naive Isn’t life but a story we write? By ourselves; for ourselves To live without stealth We complain and we whine Even though there is no line Between reality and story Because reality can be the story As days go by, we flip pages As choices are made, we run out of ink As sorrow is felt, a salty flood on the page As fear is hoarded, shaky hands scribble words out of sync We are not authors, yet we are Perhaps if we knew what we actually wanted Out of this story We would’ve found glory But is it over yet? I think not We still breathe; and think With or without fiends Carve or paint, no word is quaint

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Date: 9/23/2021 1:45:00 PM
Shreya, wonderful writing, I enjoyed your poem very much ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Shreya Ln
Date: 9/28/2021 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 9/23/2021 12:38:00 AM
Your poems are great in fluency and free-flowing words, rhythm, and lyricism. "As days go by, we flip pages As choices are made, we run out of ink As sorrow is felt, a salty flood on the page As fear is hoarded, shaky hands scribble words out of sync" - Very beautiful lines. Further, I take this opportunity to thank you for the chance you have given me to take part in your contest. I really enjoyed thinking about the subject and putting down my thoughts. Thank you very much.
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Shreya Ln
Date: 9/28/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Christuraj! I always enjoy reading your poems as well, be it for a contest or not.

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