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Stormy Encounter (John Heck's No-No Nonet Challenge)

Around fires of desire -- danced she Dark-eyed beauty captures his soul Castanets and stormy feet Flailed to fiery beat Encountered heart tones Chords--Unrobed heat Guitar strings Kissed by Song

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Date: 11/10/2008 12:13:00 PM

I like the active nature of this poem. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest--this is a winner in my book. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/22/2008 3:52:00 AM

Ooo, I can hear that salsa beat now! Well done nonet, a sure winner! Love Kristin

Sue Mason

Date: 10/21/2008 5:53:00 PM

Well my goodness, good luck to you also, Adell and this is surely a winner! It isn't necessary to explain what a nonet is though. People can look it up under Forms of Poetry in the Resources list on the Home page ... smile ... having it at the end takes away from the power of this seductive dance ... hope you don't object to my comment as its given with best wishes!!

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/20/2008 4:06:00 PM

Such a mysterious and sensual mood you have captured. The imagery is so well expressed. Great use of this poetry form. Good luck! Love, Shar