Sam Kauffman Poet Rhyme

Storms of Fall Splendor

8-16 Lines of Fall Splendor – 9-12-23
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Storms of Fall Splendor

Whirlwinds of splendor jitterbug in back streets,
Autumn’s song breathes in a blizzard of umber,
Downpours of vermillion create flushed retreats
Crimson cloudbursts, impetuous as thunder.

Tempests magenta scuttle on winding roads
While squalls of cerise in warm copper whorls twirl
Gusts of red garnet blow across the crossroads
And, like gales of laughter, orange giggles swirl.

Russet storm winds blow in dazzling fandangos 
Auburn firestorms spin in scarlet enchantment
Ethereal fogs spin gusts of gold tangos 
Flurries of sunlight – autumnal event.

Showers of glory chant in mistrals of red
Twisters of ruby across fields and moraines
Outbursts of amber, maroon brouhahas spread,
On waiting roads, sidewalks, avenues and lanes.

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Sotto Poet October 4, 2023 at 2:04 PM This poem is an exquisite masterpiece, crafted by a skilled poet who possesses a unique talent for evoking vibrant imagery. It is a precious jewel that emanates a gentle radiance. Sam, your poetry is truly remarkable, as it captures the breathtaking beauty of autumn storms. The leaves, adorned in a myriad of hues, gracefully pirouette in the air, creating a mesmerizing spectacle. Undoubtedly, fall is the most enchanting season of all. Congratulations on your win.

Linda Alice Fowler October 1, 2023 at 10:19 AM Imagery at its best Sam. You have captured the colorful beauty of autumnal rains. Congratulations! :) Sam Kauffman October 3, 2023 at 9:45 AM Thank you so much, Linda! When the leaves from our Liquid Amber fall, I feel like I am in a blizzard of color! Such an amazing experience of "splendor!" So grateful for your visit! Sending you blessings of autumn joy!

Tania Kitchin September 29, 2023 at 2:07 PM Sam, a colorful fall poem, very descriptive, congratulations on your winning placement Sam Kauffman September 30, 2023 at 2:38 PM Tania, the word "splendor" was such an amazing trigger for writing this poem. So grateful! I have always loved watching the multi-colored leaves of autumn fall like raindrops in a storm and standing in their glorious rain! Thank you for this wonderful contest theme and for your placement among so many absolutely delightful poems. Blessings of fall delight to you!

Robert Lindley September 20, 2023 at 7:21 AM My friend, to me this is a colorful and exceedingly fine poem. Such as only a master poet can create. A gem that softly glows . A fav.. God bless you.... Sam Kauffman September 30, 2023 at 2:34 PM Bob, I am so grateful for, and humbled by, the blessing of your lovely message. Thank you. So honored by your fav! I have always loved a fall rainstorm when the colors of fall seem to be like the raindrops themselves. Sending you autumn blessings colored in joy dear friend!

Joanna Daniel September 19, 2023 at 1:45 AM Wow! Colourful and intriguing imagery, Sam:) Sam Kauffman September 30, 2023 at 2:31 PM Thank you so much Jo! Had fun creating downpours and blizzards of fall color as autumn storms begin to form! Blessings!

Beryl Edmonds September 15, 2023 at 3:36 PM Lovely colourful poetry Sam, there’s something quite glorious about the storms of fall, when coloured leaves dance from the trees, in the best season of all.. Belle Sam Kauffman September 18, 2023 at 11:30 AM Hi Belle! Thank you!! I agree. There is something "glorious" about standing in a storm of color as leaves fall all around us. It is an amazing and unique season whose gift to us is inspiration. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of autumn joy!

Silent One September 15, 2023 at 12:55 PM Sam you have such an exquisite way with words and the imagery in this is just so vivid.. you are a true poem ... some great word pairings with adjectives like russet storm winds blow in dazzling fandangos and showers of glory chant in mistrals of red... amazing poetry. Sam Kauffman September 18, 2023 at 11:27 AM Thank you so much SO. I am indeed honored by your wonderful feedback especially from you as a master wordsmith! We are truly blessed to have words as best friends who come and play with us! So grateful for your words of encouragement! Sending you blessings of autumn joy and my gratitude!

Juliet Ligon September 13, 2023 at 6:21 PM I love your use of those gorgeous color choices with the movement of the atmosphere! Sam Kauffman September 14, 2023 at 10:12 AM Greetings Juliet! So wonderful to hear from you. I am so happy you got to share in the colorful splendor of this season through this poem. Such an amazing opportunity to dwell on beauty. Sending you blessings of harvest joy.

Paige Hind September 13, 2023 at 2:34 PM A beautifully written poem! Your images and words are breathtaking. Sam Kauffman September 14, 2023 at 10:13 AM Thank you so much Paige! Autumn is a truly amazing season. So rich in eye catching colors, textures and contrast. Wonderful contest theme and opportunity to dwell on splendor! Blessings of autumn joy ??! Sam Kauffman September 14, 2023 at 10:08 AM Thank you so much Paige! Autumn is a truly amazing season. So rich in eye catching colors, textures and contrast. Wonderful contest theme and opportunity to dwell on splendor! Blessings of autumn joy ??!

Ink Empress September 13, 2023 at 6:15 AM Hi talented soul, its been a while since ive last read you, and i must say, im impressed by your imagery, and the way you’ve phrased lines so creatively. Your use of various shades of autumn using colors and gems that go so well together is impeccable. I especially love “ gusts of red garnet blow” whoa! “ russet storm winds” “ flurries of sunlight” you really have a unique way of describing things. So profound and so artistic! Definitely a fave for me . And your rhymes are brilliant. BOL Sam Kauffman September 13, 2023 at 10:05 AM Hi Inky! So good to hear from you. I am always lifted up by your wonderful feedback! Thank you!! Couldn't help but think of fall color like a rainbow of leaves on the loose spreading beauty. With your talent for using color I am especially honored by your lovely note! Wasn't sure what I was going to write but the contest theme sparked some inspiration. I am honored by your fav! So glad you enjoyed it! Had fun with the rhymes! Take care my friend! Sending you blessings of fall joy!

Darlene De Beaulieu September 12, 2023 at 3:03 PM Hello Sam Kauffman, This a wonderful poem abut fall. We do have fall storms. It will be cooler tonight. summer is almost over. so sad. Hugs. /Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu September 13, 2023 at 2:45 PM Hello Sam, It will get colder tonight. Today it started to be cooloer then warmed up in the afternoon. The leaves have not fallen yet. They are slowly changing colors. It is beautiful when mother nature spills her paint box in the right places. Hugs. . /Darlene\ Sam Kauffman September 13, 2023 at 9:57 AM Hi Darlene! As I stand beneath trees losing their leaves and watch the leaves fall it is like being in a storm of color! Such magnificent an experience! Was fun to put that into words! It looks like we could be getting some rain later in the month. Like you, I have a hard time letting go of summer! Thank you for your lovely feedback and for stopping by to leave your message! Sending blessings of fall joy and a hug!

Regina Mcintosh September 12, 2023 at 2:44 PM Lovely. My favorite season - a season that trembles with joy, peace, hope for the heart. Love this. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina Sam Kauffman September 12, 2023 at 4:03 PM Hi Gina! I, too, love the grandeur of fall. It is a splendid season. I am so glad you loved this poem! I loved thinking about the glory of fall. Thank you so much for your beautiful feedback and your good wishes. Blessings and hugs to you!