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Storming Through the Sea - a Collaboration With Joseph May

The weary sailors were lost at sea, Hoping to find a guiding light, Wondering if they would survive this misery, And escape their stormy plight; But the mighty waves would not relent, And roared like thunder through the night, The ship was tossed with fierce intent, The sea was showing them its might; The wind was blowing against them, And the sailors did not give up their fight, But they forgot their captain was at the helm, Who had noticed a beacon shining bright; The lighthouse was but a speck in the storm, While turbulent waves gave a sure fright, Still, far, they could see an island form, And to them, it was the most beautiful sight; The captain whistled and steered the ship, The sailors encouraged, held on tight, Together, they did not let their vessel flip, As they reached the island safe alright. 07/15/17 Thank you Joseph for the lovely chance you gave me to work with you on this poem, it was a great pleasure...

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Date: 7/20/2017 11:18:00 PM
Even a sliver of hope is so overwhelming in time of despair. I love this engaging poem.
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Date: 7/16/2017 10:31:00 AM
Very impressive write ... A great collaboration ... Enjoyed very much ...
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Date: 7/16/2017 8:10:00 AM
Excellent rhyme, captivating writing, amazing images dear, Jo! Bravo to you and to Joseph! Good luck!
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Date: 7/15/2017 8:46:00 PM
Wonderful write, Jo and Joseph. I'm planning another pantounim contest with a light house in a storm. I'll set it up as soon as I write my poem first :-)
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Date: 7/15/2017 11:22:00 AM
Jo, I mentioned on the other one this had me on the edge of my seat! This is a great collaboration :)
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Date: 7/15/2017 10:42:00 AM
Lovely collaboration with great imagery
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Date: 7/15/2017 10:38:00 AM
It was a pleasure writing this poem with you Jo..
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