Storming the Loo

The old people crew hastens to bathroom
even if earthquake or hurricane looms.
     It’s their mission’s caper
     to waste the most paper.
After relief, activities resume.

11/17/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hawkins Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 7:46 PM
I am 83 and this limerick is spot on. When my husband and I go away on holiday. We look for rest rooms on the map before we go anywhere. Not yet taking our own TP but always have a big box of tissues in the care......
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:42 AM
So important to be in the know....don’t want to get caught with our pants down ;) LOL
Wolf Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Ha ha! This one's a real 'loo-loo,' Kim. ~ Sighs of Relief, Paperboy
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 8:40 AM
LOL! Could be on a roll...
Mcintosh Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 12:55 PM
So cute, dear Kim... Love it. God bless you with many, many more
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:49 PM
Thank you, my friend!
La France Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Kim, a fun limerick, oh yes the old folks love their toilet paper _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 8:03 AM
LOL!
One Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Ha!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:46 AM
LOL
Buhagiar Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 2:56 AM
See that they are soft!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:45 AM
I knew you were a softy :)
Faulkner Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Time to stockpile the T.P. - again! The store shelves are depressingly bare~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:45 AM
I rarely go...to the store that is. Sad when you can’t find what you need.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:39 PM
Stunningly hilarious Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:53 PM
LOL...thanks :)
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