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Poem of the day 10-29-2025

May be a doodle of text that says 'when it's hard to keep going @mindrordneamis just take it one step at a time'

STORM WITHIN ME

Through anger
Fill breath eased back, dark
Empoisonment loss
Yet in faint warm-hued shadows
Trampling down

I, docile
Woven in and round
In unfailing peace
Breathless in truths solitude
Healing angst
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:59 PM
This is great, Eve!! Congrats!! I relate-
Alex Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Indeed very powerful with verses such as "Breathless in truths solitude" - Congratulations!
Banerjee Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Very strong messaging. Loved it! Congratulations :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:25 PM
Congrats on POTD, Eve!
Rodgers Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 2:25 PM
Dear Eve, Congrats on POTD that is beautifully restrained just like a storm that’s learned to breathe. A calm in your chaos, and I love how it moves from turmoil to quiet healing without ever losing its depth. Autumn Blessings, Dear Eve, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Way to go, Eve. Congrats on your podium win
George Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Powerfully articulated, your slow but steady movement to a place of healing in times of inner anguish. Congratulations Eve on your POTD honor.
Messina Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 3:03 PM
Belated Congrats on POTD, Eve. Hope you enjoyed your special day :) hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 12:01 AM
Congratulations Eve on having received poem of the day. We all have to weather the storms inside now and then when there’s torture in our hearts, but thankfully we find peace again… Beryl
Roper Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 9:33 PM
Thank everyone of you for the blessed encouragement in your words.
Nicole Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 7:33 PM
Dearest Eve, it does work best if you embrace those moments, a step at a time. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ramel Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 6:18 PM
Congrats on POTD Eve
Lawless Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 3:57 PM
beautifully written sentiment Eve..."breathless in truth's solitude"...would we could all feel that...
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on very pithy POTD honor! Have a wonderful day with best regards :-)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "STORM WITHIN ME" write. Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Anaya Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Great job, within such limited syllables. Congratulations on POTD!
Delegans Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 6:04 AM
Great poem! It feels raw but calm at the same time. "Breathless in truths solitude" will stick with me. Congrats on POTD, Eve!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 4:51 AM
returning to congratulate you on you POTD desigation. Hooray!
Gifford Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 4:06 AM
Hello Eve, congratulations on winning POTD with your beautiful poem. Nicely done. Have a wonderful day.
Kitchin Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 2:50 AM
Eve, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 2:15 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Eve :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Congratulations on winning potd with your unique talent Eve!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 3:06 PM
wow! I feel as if I journeyed with you to pleace of healing...so succinctly written. A fave!
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Positive note you ended on. Well done
Kauffman Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Eve, your amazing journey to a place of healing in your stanzas is simply amazing. I can so easily relate to your experience. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of autumn joy and for All Souls!
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