Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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27.10.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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PENTASTITCH IT Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

4th place in the contest

- Storm Within Me -

   Lava flow
   lament of the lost
   The inky fingers
   Circle in the spider's web
   - pitiful

   Overcome
   I am still learning
   positive self-talk
   The negative energies
   - let them die

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Upasana Banerjee October 31, 2025 at 8:27 PM I needed to read this today. Thank you and congratulations! :)

Paige Hind October 31, 2025 at 7:05 PM This is bright and beautiful- congrats :)

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2025 at 11:36 AM I think yours is one of my favorites using this title . Congrats to you in the contest

Sara Kendrick October 30, 2025 at 4:48 AM Awesome work, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed reading it. We definitely need to get rid of negative energies if at all possible and live life to the fullest. Sara K Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:37 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

I Am Anaya October 29, 2025 at 6:09 AM If only energy could die, negatively affects health. Best of luck with it all~ Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:37 AM - Anaya, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino October 29, 2025 at 5:24 AM Indeed, let the positive energy loose. We have far more control over reality than we think...starts with faith in self...and then the latent power over all our creator has given us. Well said, Anne. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:37 AM - Joe, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2025 at 8:16 PM Yes, we should encourage ourselves. Sometimes, we have a bad day, but like they say..get back on the horse. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:36 AM - Thank you very much Kim :) - hugs

sara Etgen-Baker October 28, 2025 at 3:40 PM such intense emotions in such a few words. Well penned and inspirational...yes, let the negative energies die! hugs from Texas, Sara Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:36 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

Karen Jones October 28, 2025 at 3:25 PM I love this! Yes we must let go of negative energy and embrace positive energy! Great thoughts! Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:36 AM - Thank you very much Karen :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman October 28, 2025 at 12:05 PM Dear Anne-Lise, there is a tornado of emotions in your poem! And I love your commitment to the birthing of positive "energies!! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings! Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:35 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Sam :) - hugs

Sotto Poet October 28, 2025 at 10:45 AM Exquisite lines woven with vivid mental representations and deeply connected emotions. Good luck , dear friend. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:35 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Las :) - hugs

Jay Narain October 28, 2025 at 10:17 AM Nice inspiring poem. Well penned. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:34 AM - Jay, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs

Eve Roper October 28, 2025 at 10:10 AM Fabulous verse with imagery and feelings. Good luck my friend Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:33 AM - Eve, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs

Yann Rolland October 27, 2025 at 5:22 PM nice poetry to cheer up or rebound we must face future with bravery, i think, whatever happens, thanks for the beautiful and inspiring tribute Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2025 at 11:33 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Yann :) - hugs