Storm Embrace

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Moth and mist kiss her lips her loneliness from the dark dew And how she grips nomadic clouds As if that was her only foist. I ache for their sighs and songs her strong want to embrace the welkin But when she reached the tempest It hugs her deeper than my embrace. Written: October 16, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/19/2022 9:36:00 AM

I sense a struggle to understand the choices made, to enter into the unknown, the wild; and still enbrace it at a depth deeper than a normal human embace of love. Danger has its lure and a price to be paid for submission unto it. Very poetic writing, Lasaad. Open to many interpretations. Be well my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/17/2022 5:03:00 AM

Skillfully done. I like the tenor of your poem my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/16/2022 11:03:00 AM

Wow! So good, my friend! Fave!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/16/2022 10:15:00 AM

Powerful verses; blooming poetic beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Be blessed!