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Storm Embrace

Moth and mist kiss her lips her loneliness from the dark dew And how she grips nomadic clouds As if that was her only foist. I ache for their sighs and songs her strong want to embrace the welkin But when she reached the tempest It hugs her deeper than my embrace.
Written: October 16, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 9:36 AM
I sense a struggle to understand the choices made, to enter into the unknown, the wild; and still enbrace it at a depth deeper than a normal human embace of love. Danger has its lure and a price to be paid for submission unto it. Very poetic writing, Lasaad. Open to many interpretations. Be well my friend. Bill
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 5:03 AM
Skillfully done. I like the tenor of your poem my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Wow! So good, my friend! Fave!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 10:15 AM
Powerful verses; blooming poetic beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Be blessed!
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