Storm Concrete

The day was fine and sunlit, Decorated by several clouds drifting 
     aimlessly in the radiant ocean-blue sky. Chorused by gentle 
            puffs of the morning breeze, Sending leaves on the
                streets twirling  like ballerinas in a dazzling and
                     mesmerising dance. and the trees too, 
                           waving their twigs like hands 
                         saluting people walking past,
                    Then the emergency siren
              suddenly shrieked,
      Threatening of a 
       descending storm,
          Send us scurrying
               to safety, As dark
                    clouds stretched
               across the horizon
             and its shadow
          slowly devours 
               the daylight,
                 People around 
                                                  the 
                                                village
                                         stormed
                                            like a colony
                                                   of ants panicking
                                               from the incoming
                                             storm,
                Busy sand-bagging        their houses
                           and boarding        up their windows with
                        plywood To keep         them from falling apart.
                     I was inside my study          room, Huddled beneath
           the mountain of textbooks        piling around me, Terrified
      that I may not survive from       whatever’s happening outside,
 From the storm clouds swarming       over the school, Unleashing
                  sudden, violent bolts of      lightning slashing across the skyline
            As the deafening roar of          thunder echoed through the village,
                   And then it came.     Cruel and merciless rain beating down
                upon us, An untamed     ocean of terror and destruction 
                           thrown from the      unusually blackened sky 
                                    accompanied     by the howling of
                                          immense    hurricane-like wind,
                                               Red    blood-like sap
                                               spurted
                                     from the trees moaning
                              and groaning in agony As their limbs
                    were brutally ripped away by the monstrous downpour.
              The winds were savage animals screaming at the children While    
                         gnawing and clawing at our houses like a  pack
                         of hungry wolves searching for their frightened
                         prey. Iced daggers stabbed at my feet  As   the
                         waterfall gushed through our roof And knocked
                         me to the floor. Slowing the pressure eased, as
                         the rain gradually lessoned, until finally    fading 
                         into a charming melody, Resembling the graceful
                         chimes of bells. The molten-gold rays peaked out
                         over the mountain-tops Emerging from behind a 
                                           peaceful
                                        sheet of mist,
                                  Casting slanted beams
                                of light shining across the
                              village. Fluttering of wings could
                           be heard as birds erupted from their
                        shelters followed by an explosion of elegant
                     song. They sailed majestically over the schoolyard
                 in unison, Chirping and cheeping through the village’s
                 moat of vast forest  as  happy as a newborn penguin.
                   When I stared toward   the golden coin glistening 
                       in the brilliant sky,         It appeared to me 
                         that the day                  was fine and 
                               sunlit                       Decorated
                                                    by
                                                             
                   several
                                                    clouds
               drifting 

                                 aimlessly
                                                                 in
          the 
                     radiant                           ocean-blue
                                                                                     sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roberts Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 3:38 PM
I LOVE this on both accounts!! The poem and the form
Pan Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thanks!
Daniel Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 4:12 AM
This is an excellent concrete poem, Jamie:) a 7:) The content is cool too:)
Pan Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Thanks!
La France Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 5:36 PM
Jamie, you have done your Imagism poem Storm nicely in Concrete, it has a swirling, windy effect, well done ~
Pan Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 2:31 AM
Thank you!
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